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on some deleted poem 21 Jul 2003, 3:40 PM
ha my suitemate last year was named dirty dave.
fucking ugly and dirty ass motherfucker from buttfuck, ohio. this poem describes him to the teeth. maybe we know the same dirty dave.
on Yellow Star by Mr Pig 21 Jul 2003, 3:38 PM
seriously, how many
schindler's lists and pianos do we need?
maybe until every director gets an oscar

on some deleted poem 14 Jul 2003, 1:10 PM
Derek Zoolander asked the same question
cept he looked into a puddle
on #1 entry from Chico, the star stalker on Pico by <{Baba^Yaga}> 25 Jul 2003, 12:33 PM
haha i love
"and dashed
home to dance naked and kareoke while preparing
my traditional Korean dinner,"
fucking koreans and their kareoke
on some deleted poem 25 Jul 2003, 12:51 PM
"Simplistic words" doesn't sound great
I think Simple might work better.

LoL "Like a dead man swinging to and fro from a rope" kinda gave me the image of a hung convict swinging back and forth like a swing.
But it fits into the death thing after it...

on The man by highnightmaregurl 25 Jul 2003, 1:05 PM
"even if you don't pray your prayer"
why not take out prayer

Dammit Woman
Stop following the man!
jk
continue
on whatever by ~ska~ 25 Jul 2003, 1:43 PM
omg this poem is the best rhyming poem i have ever read
EVER
on hopefully im something by ~ska~ 25 Jul 2003, 1:46 PM
Maybe you're the girl that likes cum
Maybe you're the girl who i beat like a drum
Maybe you're the girl stung out on coke
Maybe you're the girl my daddy likes to poke
Maybe you're the girl who loves to rhyme
Maybe you're the girl who fucked a lime
on A Student in Descent by EAger to Offend 23 Jul 2003, 8:45 PM
hm interesting
i like it
on Extended Stay (the motel) by THE GOD OF DEATH 23 Jul 2003, 11:06 AM
what do you get
when you cross an owl
with a bungee cord?

MY ASS

- great poem bongshang
on some deleted poem 23 Jul 2003, 1:19 AM
beautiful!
on Tomorrow by jude 23 Jul 2003, 1:21 AM
u speak from your heart
...
it's so generic tho
on Druid Girl Mizunderstood Poet of 1984 by 68.75.19.117 24 Jul 2003, 10:30 PM
This poem started off as a poem of respect
and i do still respect you
but you deleted my comments?!
and it wasn't even that mean
I was helping you out
:(
*tear
on Fucking A!?!? by thepinkbunnyofdoom 19 Jul 2003, 5:45 PM

Look.. if you had.. one shot, or one opportunity
To seize everything you ever wanted.. in one moment
Would you capture it.. or just let it slip? Yo..


His palms are sweaty, knees weak, arms are heavy
There's vomit on his sweater already, mom's spaghetti
He's nervous, but on the surface he looks calm and ready
to drops bombs, but he keeps on forgetting
what he wrote down, the whole crowd goes so loud
He opens his mouth but the words won't come out
He's chokin, how? Everybody's jokin now
The clock's run out, time's up, over - BLAOW!
on You wouldn't know God from Adam by horus8 19 Jul 2003, 6:56 PM
hahaha that was great

also people who give anonymous zeros are pussies
on Border towns & the runs by horus8 17 Jul 2003, 6:25 PM
this is great stuff man
on Its Blue by aurora 3 Jul 2003, 10:41 AM
eifel 65
or watever
that nasty euro techno trash band comes to mind

:( bad thoughts
yet pleasant poetry
i'm torn
on My last ever poemranker transmission by King Abdullah II 3 Jul 2003, 12:38 AM
sad to hear this
i'll miss your witty comments
and esp your poems
goodluck and goodbye
on Extra Strength VaginexII (Free curse) by Wurt Kale by Shardik 2 Jul 2003, 6:22 PM
lol
dammit shardik
i was gunna write one making fun of the poem today.
u beat me to it
mine was gunna be called

Lubriderm: Advanced Therapy for extra dry skin
on untitled by betty 23 Jul 2003, 11:04 AM
this is great