on Too Much by intheailse
21 Mar 2003, 11:19 AM
This is an awesome poem, I feel the same alot of the time, I know I have skill and potential but its all just a pipe dream unless I do something about it.
on Tearing Me Apart (again) by intheailse
21 Mar 2003, 11:16 AM
Very nice
replying on His Dying Words (2nd draft) by Ranger
21 Mar 2003, 11:14 AM
I like the "crickets song" its original
on PIGS of the world by wLeBlanc IIIw
20 Mar 2003, 9:36 PM
Why do habe to go and trash God like that, whad he ever do to you
on I'll Break You Down by Crakyamuni
18 Mar 2003, 5:57 PM
Crap i meant "or as"i always do that
on I'll Break You Down by Crakyamuni
18 Mar 2003, 5:56 PM
Corporate america sucks, of as horus would say laggniappe
on Billy Bytack Forces His Children To Sell Jesus by horus8
18 Mar 2003, 5:51 PM
Here it is,
Submerged in endless (trailing off)
I watch them fade by (sigh)
Lifeless and Stone-faced (paining on)
I see...
The face I use to be
They want to feel this (straining on)
They want to sense this (now)
Drunk with existence (waking me)
I'll show you something (someone) you can feel
Submerged in endless (trailing off)
I watch them fade by (sigh)
Lifeless and Stone-faced (paining on)
I see...
The face I use to be
They want to feel this (straining on)
They want to sense this (now)
Drunk with existence (waking me)
I'll show you something (someone) you can feel
on Billy Bytack Forces His Children To Sell Jesus by horus8
18 Mar 2003, 5:48 PM
This poem reminds me of a Project 86 song in the way it is put together. Nice job horus, whats with the 8 in your name anyways?
on Green genius by INTRANSIT
18 Mar 2003, 5:41 PM
um..hmm
on iodine and baby oil by rockinindividual
18 Mar 2003, 5:30 PM
The whole baby oil thing sounds a little wierd but works. Could have used a little more backround on the charecter maybe
on Horse meat & pistols by <{Baba^Yaga}>
18 Mar 2003, 5:19 PM
Strange and obscene
on A Face Of Sadness by mr_ice55
18 Mar 2003, 2:02 PM
Awesome, could be better if u dropped the last para tho. And changed "pillow" to somthing else
on Unmasking Wyverns by horus8
18 Mar 2003, 12:15 PM
Cool
replying on Tell me I suck by Blindproject217
18 Mar 2003, 12:07 PM
Cool thanx
replying on lost by elizabethann
17 Mar 2003, 4:16 PM
I understand it, I just dont see where its going. Its just a random mental image with no purpose. I dont mean to trash peoples stuff, Im just given my 10 cents, thats what this whole thing is about
on lost by elizabethann
17 Mar 2003, 4:13 PM
Not sure what u mean
on While flipping over stones by <{Baba^Yaga}>
17 Mar 2003, 4:10 PM
I like it
replying on Tell me I suck by Blindproject217
17 Mar 2003, 4:06 PM
hahah ok
replying on Another Dull Moment by Blindproject217
17 Mar 2003, 9:45 AM
Thanx this is my first real attempt at this so it kinda sux.