on We Have Nothing to Talk About by jessicazee
3 Mar 2005, 6:35 AM
Gritty.
on Paris 1941-63 by Mister Cakes
9 Feb 2005, 9:00 AM
Masterpiece.
on Lent Begins by jessicazee
4 Feb 2005, 8:31 AM
What a lovely world you inhabit.
on A Flower for Monet by Shuushin
9 Feb 2005, 8:02 AM
Shite.
on Ceylon Cries by Mona Lisa
15 Feb 2005, 5:32 AM
Your Haiku series on current affairs continues to amaze!
Please do one on Charles and Camilla, my one is rubbish:
ears in a bridal
party, the synod ejects
equine betrothal.
Please do one on Charles and Camilla, my one is rubbish:
ears in a bridal
party, the synod ejects
equine betrothal.
on The Man I Love by Dovina
15 Feb 2005, 5:48 AM
A man that would understand what the hell your forever parping on about! For god sake set your sights a little more realistically, try a man who doesn't run away whilst throwing up when you lurch into the room like a floundering minky.
on Pillow Talk by horus8
16 Feb 2005, 5:37 AM
I always feel like I have just had an anal douche and forgot to shut my mouth when I read your poemes. -1-0-
on some deleted poem
16 Feb 2005, 5:39 AM
A trampled on sperm-splat.
on Hard Month by wlshepherd
16 Feb 2005, 5:42 AM
This is appalling. To think of the rain dog shivering and the some snow cold bird, really evokes massive feelings of having just gargled with Sperm.
on ~RePOST~Cupid's Arrow <----<< by nothingtoanyone
16 Feb 2005, 5:52 AM
Either I am being jolly dim and don't understand your emittence, giving me the intellgence of a sqeaky parp compared to your large voiding of follow through, or your poem was a colossal waste of time both to write and to read.
On the plus side I really like the use of spacing.
On the plus side I really like the use of spacing.
on some deleted poem
16 Feb 2005, 7:09 AM
The Homo Lord poeme
To make this you will require:
One gay
A computer
Internet access
Appalling adjectives
Turgid imagery
A 0
on some deleted poem
22 Feb 2005, 5:01 AM
Is this about the old Yugoslavian dictator? If so, it is really toss, however, if it is about one of the Jackson 5 then it is really toss.
on some deleted poem
24 Feb 2005, 7:52 AM
This poem reaches deep into the dark anus of failure and pulls out a plump loaf of such proportions it would embarass Violet Suede.
on Itâs the Management by Dovina
28 Feb 2005, 5:11 AM
Do you always go down when your boss tells you to?
on Background Noise by Plaidypus
28 Feb 2005, 5:16 AM
A terribly dangerous poeme with grave consequnces for the unwitting reader.
on spiders and butterflies by Mona Lisa
3 Mar 2005, 6:36 AM
Very dull
on some deleted poem
3 Mar 2005, 6:31 AM
Several blind monkeys randomly choosing words from a revolving wheel upon which words had been arbitrarily arrayed would probably blanch if they ever managed to choose such confused dross as "Now watched me dangling as I struggled to breathe". You smelly virgin.
on My Fair Maiden! by Sashaclese
3 Mar 2005, 6:32 AM
Awful.