poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Mona Lisa (21-40)

Comments byMona Lisa, 21–40 back. Include replies

Goodness me there seems to be a real homo theme going on tonight. This however (unlike our camp friend Gay As Fuck) is a more solid, fluid work. 8
on I'll be your Gimp by GAY AS FU*K 2 Jul 2003, 1:42 PM
I am sure your poems suck better than you do.
on Mirage by Wulf 2 Jul 2003, 1:41 PM
This one has lots of potential but the formation of verse destroys the flow and its like a hybrid of 3 maybe 4 poems with conflicting points all over the place. 6
on He Looks Great In Lycra by GAY AS FU*K 7 Aug 2003, 6:08 AM
You have a talent for sucking at many things.

But it did make me laugh and spit my Coke on to the screen.
on some deleted poem 7 Aug 2003, 6:05 AM
S2L1 typo - practically.

Otherwise virtuoso in every regard.
on Angel by mistaric 7 Aug 2003, 6:03 AM
Is this a Joke?
funny
on Orbiting Venus by scitz 2 Jul 2003, 1:35 PM
Some choice lines in here and you avoid smut and instead employ decorum in your expression.
Its very good and i see you have paid homage to us ladies. 9
on I wanna convert him by GAY AS FU*K 2 Jul 2003, 1:37 PM
Your so not gay, who are you really?

I know lots of gay men and I think your possibly in awe of them, married with no excitement maybe in your bedroom. (its quite funny though)
on Watching My Childhood Vanish by Caducus 1 Jul 2003, 4:36 AM
Impressive ! moving yet quite funny in parts.
on How I fuck Freud off in the shower by horus8 13 Jun 2003, 3:56 AM
Disgustingly enjoyable and witty. I will give you an 8 if you promise to seek therapy over these golden showers.
on Lake Pyramid's Secret by Bachus 13 Jun 2003, 6:54 AM
I was rarely in class but I have stormed out of auditions once or twice. 7
on Dirge by Nicholas Jones 13 Jun 2003, 6:21 AM
Nice enough but the punch you packed was short of winding me 7
on A Moment In Nowhere by Mr Pig 5 Jun 2003, 7:59 AM
Teach me Mr Pig this is beautiful and I am beginning to think you must be a lady for you are in touch with the femimine aura.

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on A Summers Day In Stolen Eden by Mr Pig 27 May 2003, 3:36 PM
Wonderful !
A myriad of images which you have condensed more so than the others. This reminds me of a Frost poem I read
on Love by simone_girard 20 May 2003, 11:32 AM
reading this made me feel like I've eaten to many sweets. Far too immature and full of cliches, sorry its pants.
on The Cereal Killer Blues by <{Baba^Yaga}> 11 Aug 2003, 4:40 AM
I used to have a Fiat but it broke down on me more times than my ex
on some deleted poem 14 Aug 2003, 3:41 AM
lovely
on Lake Pyramid's Secret by Bachus 13 Jun 2003, 6:54 AM
oops 8
on some deleted poem 2 Jul 2003, 1:39 PM
Does he know how to use it though? and more worryingly why does his cock interest you so?