on Last attempt at "My Father's Dreams" by Joe-joe
22 Sep 2003, 11:42 AM
not bad
on Inner-city parish by richa
18 Sep 2003, 7:36 AM
Nice to see a continuation of the church theme you write so enigmatically about.
on When old men die by <{Baba^Yaga}>
18 Sep 2003, 7:37 AM
Almost romantic yet always beautiful. Smooth as the scarf I'm wearing.
on save it from the age by abecedarian
18 Sep 2003, 7:45 AM
Definitely your best 10
on some deleted poem
23 Oct 2003, 2:58 PM
2, I think not.
9
9
on some deleted poem
21 Jan 2004, 1:56 PM
Beatifully captures femininity
on some deleted poem
12 Nov 2003, 4:22 AM
vivid and it offers a fresh angle (line 5 is cool)
on My Queen by heartlessempath
12 Nov 2003, 4:23 AM
Good to see a writer who is a benefit to this site
on Mother Murder by horus8
12 Nov 2003, 4:25 AM
You go to my head like bollinger and strawberries horus8 - 8
on paint me a poem with pictures by nentwined
12 Nov 2003, 4:27 AM
Line 4 makes this.
on some deleted poem
12 Nov 2003, 4:52 AM
non comprende
on A Cup Of Tea & Company by Caducus
19 Nov 2003, 1:35 AM
dynamite
on Dealer (a senyru) by Mona Lisa
15 Jun 2004, 3:21 PM
5-7-5 structure like a haiku, but not of nature but of life.
on some deleted poem
3 Jun 2004, 10:51 AM
this depicts people and beautifies our behaviour and is not i think kitch in its descriptiion.
written with style.
written with style.
on some deleted poem
3 Jun 2004, 12:55 PM
likey
on Ceylon Cries by Mona Lisa
3 Feb 2005, 4:32 AM
For those who dont know Sri Lanka is known as the teardrop of Allah for its shape looks like a tear.
on The cat who would fly by nentwined
12 Aug 2005, 9:01 AM
Line 6 just affects the whole thing. Otherwise its a peach.