on Burst! by INTRANSIT
20 May 2003, 11:20 AM
Beautifully enticing in its description, you have me wowed.8
on may 18 by Bill Z Bub
20 May 2003, 11:23 AM
Bar a few there is some fine poems on the current entries today, this is no exception and the delivery of each line has a message and I loved it.
But do punks really sneer?
But do punks really sneer?
on some deleted poem
20 May 2003, 11:25 AM
I hope this things can only get better this sucks.
on some deleted poem
20 May 2003, 11:27 AM
Loved this bit.
The fall of the leaf,
On its back or its face
Is,
No more of a reason
To inter-polate
The fall of the leaf,
On its back or its face
Is,
No more of a reason
To inter-polate
on The Order Of Things by Mr Pig
20 May 2003, 11:29 AM
Beautifuly written, the attention to detail is astounding and I loved the message here and I think we miss it in our everyday lives, I love the way you write, are you married?
on Darkness ( A tribute to the poem FOOTPRINTS) by Mr Pig
17 May 2003, 4:26 PM
I think its wonderful. MAybe if you hadn't of referenced it to Footprints you may have had the recognition you deserve, other than that I think it carries a message of hope. 9
on some deleted poem
6 May 2003, 5:20 AM
As a woman of the world I adored this poem, especially the womb description. We ladies need to stick together on this site. I vote a 9.
on Fighting erosion by INTRANSIT
6 May 2003, 5:17 AM
Wow I really loved the imagery in this poem. I was reading the other comments and theres not much clue to the story in this I think I get it but dont want to look a fool. it was lovely reading your poem I am new here on this site and am reading all the top 15 poems in the next few days. I am giving you an 8, nice to meet you and thank you for sharing your lovely poem.
on The Blooding by Mr Pig
6 May 2003, 5:23 AM
Very touching and vividly told I loved your use of language and metaphor.
Why didnt you call yourself Mr Fox?
I vote you a 9 its wonderful.
Why didnt you call yourself Mr Fox?
I vote you a 9 its wonderful.
on some deleted poem
6 May 2003, 5:26 AM
Oh my goodness I need cheering up as I've just read Mr Pigs 'The Blooding' that too was sad. This is incredibly poignant and moving and I hope the next one in the best list is on a happier note. I vote 9.
on Unmasking Wyverns by horus8
6 May 2003, 5:29 AM
You have a wild imagination and you write with relentless passion. I liked the connotations with snakes there fascinating and mysterious. I vote 8
(at least this didn't make me sad)
(at least this didn't make me sad)
on some deleted poem
6 May 2003, 5:32 AM
Oh my how romantic and I never expected it from a title like Bread & Oranges. I think your wasted on here you should be writing plays for high society theatres. I vote 10 and adore your work.
on Ad patres el prostitute by <{Baba^Yaga}>
6 May 2003, 5:34 AM
I have read some fine poetry today in the top 15 and this is no exception. I vote 7