on some deleted poem
12 Nov 2002, 12:22 PM
jesus, you make me ache.
on some deleted poem
12 Nov 2002, 6:44 AM
this is yellow and it's catchy, like fever of the same name. have a 7 for your efforts.
on There is no end by INTRANSIT
12 Nov 2002, 12:01 PM
yes, yes. true, but does not cut me to the quick, as the other does.
on There is no end by INTRANSIT
11 Nov 2002, 5:55 PM
hmmm, my bruises were never as pretty as pink (bless you for not knowing that???!) nor have i ever seen grey jis...as for the bad seed, yes, amen to that. but who what when where why...or at least how? i like to watch....even it if it's only on the ranker. you'll not get a vote from me until i get some salient details, sirrah!
on A Green Moons Haze by pink_punk_kisses87
11 Nov 2002, 5:57 PM
almost there....
but jigsaw aren't jagged (shattered, whatever) even though they are confusing and in a thousand pieces. dammit man! (woman)! you are a tease. shape this up. the bit about the haze seeping closer to your heart is eerily brilliant, damn you. i demand a rewrite.
but jigsaw aren't jagged (shattered, whatever) even though they are confusing and in a thousand pieces. dammit man! (woman)! you are a tease. shape this up. the bit about the haze seeping closer to your heart is eerily brilliant, damn you. i demand a rewrite.
on Handy Smurf by Bachus
11 Nov 2002, 5:58 PM
how'd he get that name anyway....hmmm
on My Woman, My Lover, My Friend by -=SeTTle=-
11 Nov 2002, 6:23 AM
you're kidding, right?
on I Respect Your Feelings As A Woman And A Human by -=SeTTle=-
11 Nov 2002, 6:24 AM
this bit is just not working for you settle. sorry. no poontang for you.
on Picnic Of Love by -=SeTTle=-
11 Nov 2002, 6:26 AM
my god, man! get your meds adjusted for the sake of all that is sacred and profane!
on gerbil by betty swallox
11 Nov 2002, 6:27 AM
funny. (but wrong rhyme scheme to be a limerick.)
on My Kites On Grandmother's Four-poster Bed by anitawit
9 Nov 2002, 2:36 PM
pretty scenes and memories
on Plastic People by cosmiccantinaguy
9 Nov 2002, 2:42 PM
this is the angriest poem i've ever read. got a solution, or just a problem?
on Reasons by little_angel_maria
11 Nov 2002, 7:14 AM
cancel time--very nice.
on An ode to my sugar daddy, but in haiku by horus8
11 Nov 2002, 5:52 PM
again, you fuck me here in public. should i be blushing? have a nine.
on me by spazzman15
12 Nov 2002, 1:42 PM
i'd rather be a hammer than a nail, and the play's the thing to catch a king....