poemranker ::20 most recent comments by <~> (1021-1040)

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on Untitled by vulcan 4 Nov 2002, 11:23 AM
these are disjointed images splattered about, with a hint cohesiveness to them. but not enough, and not pleasantly so. finish the thought. weave it together.
on Bedside Angel by feathers68 4 Nov 2002, 11:20 AM
this is just awful.
on Stranger by feathers68 4 Nov 2002, 8:42 AM
why don't you introduce yourself to her?
on arise by daniella 4 Nov 2002, 8:39 AM
finally! a poem that both tempts and delivers! nice effort.
on Alien by Mutant_X 4 Nov 2002, 11:19 AM
if you made all those errors on purpose, i'd think you had something.

you don't.
on some deleted poem 4 Nov 2002, 11:25 AM
pretty pretty words. what's behind them? have a 3 until you put some flesh on these bones. this did not satisfy.
on Down Again by Birdman42s 4 Nov 2002, 11:26 AM
prescription drugs can solve this for you, birdman
on Three pointed star by INTRANSIT 4 Nov 2002, 8:40 AM
explain, please?
on Cold Set by feathers68 4 Nov 2002, 8:41 AM
would like it better if it read: 'as behind iced farts whores enraged', but that's just me...
on fading by PunchMeInTheFace 4 Nov 2002, 8:43 AM
hoe could you have wasted this potential: :Why don't you to stay here a while?
(forever)"

arg.
on untitled by PunchMeInTheFace 4 Nov 2002, 8:45 AM
that's not what i dreamed of a a youth,but whatever.
on Got Balls? by Yardbird 4 Nov 2002, 8:53 AM
is self-consumption your passion? have a glass of milk, and BTW chocolate is yummy on most body parts.
on The rendition (once bad movie night) by ~incarnate~ 4 Nov 2002, 7:03 AM
who stood in effigy for him? why not do more with this? it's amusing...
on ITS SO HARD by adrenalize 4 Nov 2002, 7:06 AM
fix the typos. we all know it is hard to let someone go. show us why.
there are very strong emotions trying to come through. give them room.
on cool hand luke by royalflesh 4 Nov 2002, 7:27 AM
my favorite line:
"burned pink candles to pretend they were your body."
so sensual, but needs tightening.
on crime scene (not for the weak!) by t_t_redhot 4 Nov 2002, 7:36 AM
why put the 'not for the weak' disclaimer there if you are not going to fulfill it? there is nothing shocking here.
on In the Quiet of the Night a Tree Gently Shakes by Nicholas Jones 30 Oct 2002, 7:50 AM
'sleeps slips far'--tasty!
on My Feet by smallsun 30 Oct 2002, 7:07 AM
where can i get a pair of protective feet like that, and why didn't you lend them to your uncle?
on Her Name Is Stella by Tascobar 30 Oct 2002, 7:42 AM
why must she cost so damn much?
on St. Andrews University Marxist Society by Nicholas Jones 4 Nov 2002, 8:14 AM
true.