on some deleted poem
14 Oct 2002, 7:23 PM
iambic impies an even count. so obvious...
on some deleted poem
15 Oct 2002, 11:18 AM
swept away. today. such a sweet lament, richa.
on glory bar realities by royalflesh
14 Oct 2002, 4:47 PM
post more. pretty please.i need more.
on Jerk ?? Circle by horus8
16 Oct 2002, 8:50 AM
"Murderers still love
In their blunted
Lurching strokes"
my favorite.
try and explain it away.
i'll love a murderer as well as the next man.
In their blunted
Lurching strokes"
my favorite.
try and explain it away.
i'll love a murderer as well as the next man.
on Homemade Greetings by jessicazee
16 Oct 2002, 8:07 AM
swell. biting.
on some deleted poem
15 Oct 2002, 11:46 AM
if he is the ruinor, why would he give you that?
on First date (for Larry, a lesbian vampire) by Bachus
14 Oct 2002, 4:43 PM
disappointing ending. the fore had such aplomb, and then, ssslurp--over. bah. try again h. you know better than to foist this off on me. z,
on simple silence by daniella
15 Oct 2002, 7:07 AM
beautiful and spare.
on Rummage Sales by jessicazee
14 Oct 2002, 4:40 PM
fuckin A. the game is indeed on, lassie
on Tuesday, again and again and... by <{Baba^Yaga}>
14 Oct 2002, 4:41 PM
no. but it makes for fine lyrics. rock on, h.
on realities <from above their brilliance is short-lived> by royalflesh
14 Oct 2002, 5:08 PM
mud has no place in my mind's eye for this unrhyme; and a mississippi sky drips right for the time, ages or aeons or eras, sublime-all those vowels long, longing sing singy-sounds.... sigh. if i looked at you with long puddle eyes that poured, would you throw me down, as a god? my eyes are grey; their color they will not divulge.
wash away the mud and tell it again. the earth stains this tale of two, and more
wash away the mud and tell it again. the earth stains this tale of two, and more
on some deleted poem
14 Oct 2002, 10:46 AM
i never waffle when i wear my gowne of sorrow. perhaps i am wronged to do so.
on Child of my Buttocks by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
14 Oct 2002, 11:46 AM
'why the Browne Winds blew' or 'God goes not at all with wine!'...hard to say which i favor more. both are sheer revelation. bravo. encore.
on Few Words by Tom Colebrooke
14 Oct 2002, 8:41 AM
ask p&k. he's a journalist.
on Snow-White by vulcan
14 Oct 2002, 9:04 AM
and, calling it 'snow-white' conjurs disney for me. now i am not everyman, but i think you might consider the efeect the title has on the piece overall.
on A poets call to arms by INTRANSIT
14 Oct 2002, 9:07 AM
an army of thinkers. easier said than done, but it is a good fight, and i am fighting it, as are you. you just can't let on that you're after their soul right away, or that you're speaking (poetry) (shhh!!!). people are scared of poetry because they think it is beyond them. pshaw!
on Snow-White by vulcan
14 Oct 2002, 9:10 AM
i like what you are trying to say, but you are not communicating it effectively
on One Country by poetandknowit
14 Oct 2002, 8:20 AM
'barren in bounty'--'barren, late of bounty'? the birdsong is a beautiful touch, as are the lips and hips and the promise of both. your aim is indeed true.