on Satan wants me for a scarecrow by bondjedi
7 Aug 2002, 8:03 PM
do i sense a little poem rancor?
on Mary Mother by DevilTmptrss
6 Aug 2002, 7:43 AM
mother goose be damned. there's a new kid in town: DevilTmptrss
on some deleted poem
6 Aug 2002, 1:03 PM
obviuosly, yoda has taught you much.
on some deleted poem
6 Aug 2002, 8:10 AM
yes yes. freeform well used. nicely done.
on esopus creek by unknown
5 Aug 2002, 11:49 AM
dive right in.
on unidentified by <~>
6 Aug 2002, 12:44 PM
UPBs--unidentified party bruises.
on 22nd Anniversary by Frass
7 Aug 2002, 9:07 PM
nice, the way 'bitter' has a positive aspect in this piece. shapes my view of her more than any other, except maybe the last
on some deleted poem
7 Aug 2002, 6:42 AM
10! ten, i say. again, 10!
on loki's end by yarlgrenn
6 Aug 2002, 7:18 AM
tie me up, tie me down, i was with you 'til the end. 10 for you, for sucking me in. the pleasure, the pain... yes. more like this, please.
on Self-Rebellion, revised by emilyowey
6 Aug 2002, 7:27 AM
you had me, up until 'evil plans'. then, it fell apart for me. a 6 for you: 100% for the first half, and a pittance for the rest.
on some deleted poem
7 Aug 2002, 12:36 PM
One Ring to rule them all, One Ring to find them,
One Ring to bring them all and in the darkness bind them...
or something like that
One Ring to bring them all and in the darkness bind them...
or something like that
on some deleted poem
6 Aug 2002, 1:12 PM
knock-kneed night / did she put up a fight / when the sun rose red / he tossed his golden head / and the trees did quake / when they saw the dawn break / and the dew-cooled plains / made ready for the strain /of the scorching heat / as they saw the night retreat....
on some deleted poem
6 Aug 2002, 11:35 AM
WTF -=Dark_Angel=-, are you bending over for the lads and lassies, pulling out for the dumbed-down masses? boo, hiss. put it back up.
on Virgin Poet by emilyowey
6 Aug 2002, 7:36 AM
ignorance is bliss, emily, but do you want to be an Eloi? live. feel. endure. rise. the air will taste sweeter, the birds will enchant you, and the ocean will heave your sobs upon the senseless shores...you will harden; you will pulse; you will find new ways to love.
on some deleted poem
3 Aug 2002, 9:03 PM
psst! i think he might find them buried under the violets.
on some deleted poem
3 Aug 2002, 9:15 PM
very evocative. very nice. definitely a haiku in spirit.
on some deleted poem
7 Aug 2002, 7:59 PM
tender. human.
on some deleted poem
3 Aug 2002, 10:53 PM
big man on campus
on some deleted poem
3 Aug 2002, 10:09 PM
ignorance is bliss?