| Re: Life/Death (revised) by devotedwonder |
1-Aug-02/8:35 AM |
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if you feel the need to change so as not to offend, poetry is not for you.
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| Re: Saturation Point by malakin |
1-Aug-02/6:44 PM |
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you might find out that you're Human, and that would be scary.
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| Re: recent submissions by <~> |
1-Aug-02/1:31 PM |
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just add alcohol, and ativan?
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| Re: between you and me there is nothing by silvertongueddevil |
1-Aug-02/8:08 PM |
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| Re: Stone by ErgoErgun |
1-Aug-02/7:21 PM |
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almost there...carve a little deeper...polish it
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| Re: Concrete by beakism |
1-Aug-02/8:06 PM |
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maybe, if i had a penis i would understand what settle meant too. concrete good. kicking bad. i get that part anyway.
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| Re: incidentally, all royalties to the estate of WCW by lilli |
1-Aug-02/7:44 PM |
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you are forgiven. they were obviously deniers well spent.
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| Re: the mattress is a magnet by silvertongueddevil |
1-Aug-02/6:36 PM |
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oh. so close. i got all excited--i thought i might have stumbled upon a vilanelle! but it was not to be... <sigh> a nice effort just the same.
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| Re: BURNHAM BEECHES by longships |
1-Aug-02/2:41 PM |
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so you are bound to your freedom, for now... trees live slower lives than we do, and i wonder, can they sense us, cutting and caressing them? do they feel the loss of love, of life? walk on, as long as you have strength.
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| Re: Life/Death (revised) by devotedwonder |
1-Aug-02/7:05 AM |
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a line is drawn. i stand with the dead fetuses.
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| Re: Thinkin of ya! by KezzY20 |
1-Aug-02/10:59 AM |
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PLEASE. STOP. NOW. BEFORE SOMEONE GETS HURT.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
1-Aug-02/8:34 AM |
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ahhh. niiice. thank you. i got lost in it.
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| Re: The Nude by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
31-Jul-02/10:33 AM |
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you know you love apple pie.... J baked a fresh one and locked it in the pantry of desire, but left the window open just a crack so its sinful steam would steal silently, secretly, deviously... until, having infused its essence, you surrender your soul... leaving you nude. with pie crumbs ornamenting your dark triangle of shame.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
31-Jul-02/10:38 AM |
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thrust into this world, cast out of it: struggling ceases. nice voice.
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| Re: The Long Night by Tangerines |
31-Jul-02/11:20 AM |
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waiting, like your mom was/is in the picture? is she smiling? who took the picture? i want more. i guess you hooked me. you teased me. good job.
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| Re: Zen by necroscope7 |
31-Jul-02/8:38 AM |
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heh. a 'physically challenged' paranoid zen lumberjack. don't that beat all.
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| Re: frustration is the lamp i'm holding by silvertongueddevil |
31-Jul-02/9:24 AM |
lamplighter, bring me a lamp.
i like being turned around like that, and told a secret.
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| Re: I DON'T SMILE ANYMORE by longships |
1-Aug-02/2:21 PM |
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what happened to you? you lived through hell, and came home to find a more insidious trap sprung. may your wounds heal, and may you find peace.
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| Re: would i be considered crazy by silvertongueddevil |
31-Jul-02/10:04 AM |
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ode to obsession and passion overwhelming. i grok. aside: read 'perfume' (a novel) by patrick susskind.
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| Re: Through the eyes of life by Angel_of_fait |
1-Aug-02/1:24 PM |
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seek understanding / ye unripe adolescents / but not on this site.
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