on I Hate You by mytenderrage
30 Jul 2002, 9:14 AM
stain upon my screen / her emotions manifest, / scathe my jellied orbs.
on some deleted poem
30 Jul 2002, 9:19 AM
ooh. ooh. ah. nice meter. nice alliteration. nice mood. "it's the sharp in shards of a gem" sharp poem.
on The Nude by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
31 Jul 2002, 6:39 AM
i'm ALWAYS nude. it makes the day go smoothe. ly. um. er. mmm. -=Dark_Angel=-, keep churning em out. keep reminding us of our *essential* baseness. keep your dart gun pointed at ignorants. [sic] p.s. who holds the key to unlock your nudity?
on HOW DO I WRITE by kawakurdi
31 Jul 2002, 6:50 AM
i like the idea very much, but i think the final stanza loses steam a bit. it's more...vernacular, maybe, than the images you paint in the rest of the poem
on I Hate You by mytenderrage
30 Jul 2002, 7:28 AM
so, you got dumped. you wrote this to help process the pain. very constructive. maybe your therapist would have been a more receptive audience than the crowd here?
last time i checked, poetry utilized metaphor to express ideas.
maybe he dumped you because you have no imagination???
last time i checked, poetry utilized metaphor to express ideas.
maybe he dumped you because you have no imagination???
on some deleted poem
26 Jul 2002, 6:53 AM
frankly, i'm surpised that there's room for poetry in that eency weency world view of yours. oh, and i find it amusing that you speak of protecting 'queers' and bending to his rod, all in the same poem...
on Ode to Bad poetry by unknown
26 Jul 2002, 6:54 AM
so, what do you care about?
on some deleted poem
26 Jul 2002, 7:25 AM
i like it. passion being the breath of life
on some deleted poem
26 Jul 2002, 7:27 AM
wow. lucid. dead on. Dark Angel for mayor.
on Wounded by RobinGayle
22 Jul 2002, 9:18 AM
how many times does will you take it, as a woman, before the healing begins?
on wednesday night after church by unknown
18 Jul 2002, 12:47 PM
ah. the 'good' life...
on Birth in the Valley of Liquor by horus8
17 Jul 2002, 6:40 AM
ah, but do you know how flammable i can get....especially in high gear at my well-programmed best?
on THE DEFENSE RESTS by horus8
17 Jul 2002, 7:03 AM
left-in-the-lurch loquatious leo vs. leaving lesbian lawyer...a jaunty little tale
on Beauty, Beware by Jsylum
17 Jul 2002, 7:06 AM
i like the first 2 stanzas, but the 3rd leaves me unsatisfied
on she wonders, by <~>
17 Jul 2002, 7:15 AM
exactly the effect i was hoping for...
on some deleted poem
17 Jul 2002, 7:18 AM
succint. poignant. moving. (ahem)
on Sea Struck by Jsylum
17 Jul 2002, 7:04 AM
rock me in the cradle of this soft sursurrant sea