replying on we're insane by nolan
26 May 2003, 10:48 AM
well, since mother tortise was seen cavorting about the clouds with little ganeesha, i'd say she felt all wet and splotchy--torn up inside, if you must know. honestly -=Dark_Angel=-, I didn't think anyone could be so cruel. what with the elder tortoise's recent injuries, and her having been 'outed' for all the world to see (well, inside-outed, really), i would have thought one with such a celestial name might have shown a little more kindess than to relate her story on such an international forum.
maybe the questio you should ask yourself is, 'what shall i have for dinner?' and the answer should be, 'not turtle soup, again! hold the grapes, ship's prawne! hold them firmly, and resist!'
maybe the questio you should ask yourself is, 'what shall i have for dinner?' and the answer should be, 'not turtle soup, again! hold the grapes, ship's prawne! hold them firmly, and resist!'
replying on we're insane by nolan
26 May 2003, 8:28 AM
yes, you youd touch the clouds inside and out, in thousands of little ways. and, like ganeesha's eyes, not only would you never have to look back, you would never be able to!
replying on Theology by dougsoderstrom
26 May 2003, 8:09 AM
no. i have not gone anyhere. i have withdrawn. settle made a terrible mess of his scree, and i blame myself. i am moving to africa.
replying on Theology by dougsoderstrom
25 May 2003, 9:58 PM
yeah, well at least he got wanked for it
replying on Pour vous en seul by e1ementfire
30 Apr 2003, 1:01 PM
moi, j'adore l'homme de pomme de terre.
replying on Yay for Unspeakable Evil! by razorgrin
29 Apr 2003, 7:59 PM
Yet with strange aeons, even Death may die.
or, the thing that should not be. i'll take that hug, now, please.
:)
or, the thing that should not be. i'll take that hug, now, please.
:)
replying on The Bored Housewife by Caducus
29 Apr 2003, 8:40 AM
oh she needs more than that. it's a lot less lonely, being alone. primary source knowledge, my friend.
as someone who wouldn't buy that, i say: she's as much to blame as he is. cad, you didn't judge, but it's there.
as someone who wouldn't buy that, i say: she's as much to blame as he is. cad, you didn't judge, but it's there.
well, there's something about the sky swallowing you whole which betrays the pain you fight through. being swallowed, submitting,--you see what i mean? i feel like you are forged by will, and then you're bait on a hook at the end.
this is strong writing. but i want a stronger end.
(am i ever satisfied?)
this is strong writing. but i want a stronger end.
(am i ever satisfied?)
on Yay for Unspeakable Evil! by razorgrin
28 Apr 2003, 8:24 PM
but , surely, not without thine hand!!!
on I am a dream by mozac
24 Apr 2003, 7:40 AM
lovely.
on Before The Miscarriage. by scitz
24 Apr 2003, 7:35 AM
fuck all.
now, critically speaking, eliminate the rhymes. they cheapen it.
now, critically speaking, eliminate the rhymes. they cheapen it.
on Fighting erosion by INTRANSIT
23 Apr 2003, 7:02 AM
my my my. someone has been doing their homework.
this rocks.
this rocks.
replying on Damaged By 'Weakness' by Mr Pig
10 Apr 2003, 1:57 PM
piggy, i got that. a poem like this will get you chicks. when you battle your demons for *love*, chicks dig it.
as for people thinking you're a freak, so what?
i'd rather that, personally. stir things up a bit. maybe get them thinking. so, when i wrote my oedipus stuff, i posted it. personally, i hope they do find me freakish. because i'd rather be that than complacent any day.
it sucks that your dad was afraid to show loving kindness. it really does. but that's no reason you should hold back, especially if you feel yourself wanting to express it. sex is so much better when you can forget about perceptions and enjoy the other person, and how you please each other. lavish it on, piggy. it's good to love. trust me. and girls put up barriers too, so it's a double-fuck until you find someone you can let them down with.
i'll have to give you the edits later. got no time today. send me your email, and i'll send you a more complete commentary. xo, z
as for people thinking you're a freak, so what?
i'd rather that, personally. stir things up a bit. maybe get them thinking. so, when i wrote my oedipus stuff, i posted it. personally, i hope they do find me freakish. because i'd rather be that than complacent any day.
it sucks that your dad was afraid to show loving kindness. it really does. but that's no reason you should hold back, especially if you feel yourself wanting to express it. sex is so much better when you can forget about perceptions and enjoy the other person, and how you please each other. lavish it on, piggy. it's good to love. trust me. and girls put up barriers too, so it's a double-fuck until you find someone you can let them down with.
i'll have to give you the edits later. got no time today. send me your email, and i'll send you a more complete commentary. xo, z
on Damaged By 'Weakness' by Mr Pig
10 Apr 2003, 8:20 AM
pig,
what do you want from me? editor's comments, or a woman's comments? or both? rsvp, z
what do you want from me? editor's comments, or a woman's comments? or both? rsvp, z
replying on I Love My Socks by Bazilla
9 Apr 2003, 1:13 PM
it's a near-rhyme. why don't you go to a site for assholes, since you know so much about that condition, and nothing about that of being a poet?
replying on Phalus by Bobjim_returns
9 Apr 2003, 12:51 PM
no, it's plagiarized.
replying on YOU ARE ALL WANKERS! by Bobjim
9 Apr 2003, 12:47 PM
no. you can get one for being a fuckwad too.
on Love Greased by Jeremi B. Handrinos
9 Apr 2003, 12:43 PM
less-than-silent lucidity. you just can't be stopped.
got an mp3 of this one yet?
got an mp3 of this one yet?
what makes you a friend to all? many here have not treated you as one. in fact, they have treated you as an enemy. so, why?