Re: a comment on Spanish fLie by flatliner	23-Sep-02/3:52 PM
anybody wanna post a spoken file for us?
Re: Spanish fLie by flatliner	23-Sep-02/3:41 PM
no habla espanol.
Re: Universal Musings by blu143	23-Sep-02/3:07 PM
future past presents itself in feeble mind...try, but not so hard. let it be you instead.
Re: untitled by ThreeFourSix	23-Sep-02/3:05 PM
trippity-quick words, like the beginning of it all. when the need is sated, what will there be left but the deed? proceed with caution, but proceed.
Re: a comment on Faucet's got a nasty drip. FUCK! Not again! by <{Baba^Yaga}>	23-Sep-02/12:54 PM
hey, if he gets off by talking about war, more power to him baba. a month or two in an opium den, that would slit him up a treat.
Re: Here In The Heart of Amber by Lenore	23-Sep-02/12:30 PM
you have inspired me. i thank you.
Re: yellow afterthoughts by royalflesh	23-Sep-02/12:27 PM
i had a bag full of their broken teeth. i made a magic necklace from them. when the moon is blue, is naked time and dancing is sweetest, and mud is the only covering permittes us. and mariglds. lovely, lovely marigolds.
Re: Bitter as Wormwood by vulcan	23-Sep-02/12:23 PM
the connexion between trampled stolen roses and hearts and tombstones intrigues me, but i want more development
Re: Trespasser at the Men's Bathing Pond by Christof	23-Sep-02/12:11 PM
i'd like it better if s1 ended 'only a ripple' repeating from the line above--a sort of reinforcement of incredulity. ripples can effect untold change, when time and circumstance align just so
Re: Night Photograph by jess33	23-Sep-02/11:36 AM
sometimes what is captured on film is so much emptier though. and the inherent sadness of that can be...devastating...
Re: Pilgrim by timfowler	23-Sep-02/11:18 AM
i walked of my own will through the passages of this poem, smiled at your greying. Not at your weariness, but at your recognition of it, pilgrim.
Re: a comment on Ambiguous Love Poem For A Girl I Once Knew by poetandknowit	21-Sep-02/10:37 PM
no man who sleeps with his back to his lover can be in the top 15 list. unless, of course, he's gay. it's an unwritten law. you are false, sirrah.
Re: a comment on quickie by <~>	20-Sep-02/3:25 PM
hiya h. yep. you and me are keeping different hours these days...so, you liked this one, didja? heheheheh...
Re: a comment on BoatFuckerPoetandKnowit by bigbigdog	20-Sep-02/1:20 PM
need copies, p&k? saved 'em, figuring they might be yanked... ;]
Re: a comment on On waiting to pick up my lover on Friday by bigbigdog	20-Sep-02/1:08 PM
yes, it does have significantly different meaning, but it is an obvious copy--form and all. that's my beef. at least in the gone with the wind thing, the point of view changed. here, he's changed p&k's little girl into a transvestite/transsexual. it might be valid but it sure as hell ain't right. just my .02.
Re: a comment on Tugboats by poetandknowit	20-Sep-02/12:49 PM
once more, pretty please? it was so sage and wise, and you really made my day by posting it...
Re: a comment on Tugboats by poetandknowit	20-Sep-02/12:47 PM
write it a couple more time, okay? because we're all really really dumb here, and we didn't get your point yet.
Re: Father worked Nights, Thats why I am fucked up by bigbigdog	20-Sep-02/11:08 AM
you are one stupid fuck, bigbigdog. i don't know where you come from, but why don't you go back there? not only was it a crime to steal ogden nash's words, it is also a crime to steal p&k's. and now it's personal, 'cause you're fucking with a friend. if your goal is to get as much hate mail as possible in one afternoon, hey man, you've got a great start. fuck off, loser.
Re: BoatFuckerPoetandKnowit by bigbigdog	20-Sep-02/11:02 AM
wow. you really have no shame, no brain.
Re: a comment on Tugboats by poetandknowit	20-Sep-02/10:58 AM
you are making the assumption that we all think your disrespectful, felonious actions are really clever. wrong. clearly, your ignorance shines through.