replying on Spanish fLie by flatliner
23 Sep 2002, 3:52 PM
anybody wanna post a spoken file for us?
on Spanish fLie by flatliner
23 Sep 2002, 3:41 PM
no habla espanol.
on Universal Musings by blu143
23 Sep 2002, 3:07 PM
future past presents itself in feeble mind...try, but not so hard. let it be you instead.
on untitled by ThreeFourSix
23 Sep 2002, 3:05 PM
trippity-quick words, like the beginning of it all. when the need is sated, what will there be left but the deed? proceed with caution, but proceed.
replying on Faucet's got a nasty drip. FUCK! Not again! by <{Baba^Yaga}>
23 Sep 2002, 12:54 PM
hey, if he gets off by talking about war, more power to him baba. a month or two in an opium den, that would slit him up a treat.
on Here In The Heart of Amber by Lenore
23 Sep 2002, 12:30 PM
you have inspired me. i thank you.
on yellow afterthoughts by royalflesh
23 Sep 2002, 12:27 PM
i had a bag full of their broken teeth. i made a magic necklace from them. when the moon is blue, is naked time and dancing is sweetest, and mud is the only covering permittes us. and mariglds. lovely, lovely marigolds.
on Bitter as Wormwood by vulcan
23 Sep 2002, 12:23 PM
the connexion between trampled stolen roses and hearts and tombstones intrigues me, but i want more development
on Trespasser at the Men's Bathing Pond by Christof
23 Sep 2002, 12:11 PM
i'd like it better if s1 ended 'only a ripple' repeating from the line above--a sort of reinforcement of incredulity. ripples can effect untold change, when time and circumstance align just so
on Night Photograph by jess33
23 Sep 2002, 11:36 AM
sometimes what is captured on film is so much emptier though. and the inherent sadness of that can be...devastating...
replying on Ambiguous Love Poem For A Girl I Once Knew by poetandknowit
21 Sep 2002, 10:37 PM
no man who sleeps with his back to his lover can be in the top 15 list. unless, of course, he's gay. it's an unwritten law. you are false, sirrah.
replying on BoatFuckerPoetandKnowit by bigbigdog
20 Sep 2002, 1:20 PM
need copies, p&k? saved 'em, figuring they might be yanked...
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replying on On waiting to pick up my lover on Friday by bigbigdog
20 Sep 2002, 1:08 PM
yes, it does have significantly different meaning, but it is an obvious copy--form and all. that's my beef. at least in the gone with the wind thing, the point of view changed. here, he's changed p&k's little girl into a transvestite/transsexual. it might be valid but it sure as hell ain't right. just my .02.
replying on Tugboats by poetandknowit
20 Sep 2002, 12:49 PM
once more, pretty please? it was so sage and wise, and you really made my day by posting it...
replying on Tugboats by poetandknowit
20 Sep 2002, 12:47 PM
write it a couple more time, okay? because we're all really really dumb here, and we didn't get your point yet.
on Father worked Nights, Thats why I am fucked up by bigbigdog
20 Sep 2002, 11:08 AM
you are one stupid fuck, bigbigdog. i don't know where you come from, but why don't you go back there? not only was it a crime to steal ogden nash's words, it is also a crime to steal p&k's. and now it's personal, 'cause you're fucking with a friend. if your goal is to get as much hate mail as possible in one afternoon, hey man, you've got a great start. fuck off, loser.
on BoatFuckerPoetandKnowit by bigbigdog
20 Sep 2002, 11:02 AM
wow. you really have no shame, no brain.
replying on Tugboats by poetandknowit
20 Sep 2002, 10:58 AM
you are making the assumption that we all think your disrespectful, felonious actions are really clever. wrong. clearly, your ignorance shines through.