poemranker ::20 most recent comments by <~> (1601-1620) and replies

Comments by<~>, 1601–1620 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

replying on pissed off pretentious prat by keatsImnot 13 Sep 2002, 12:41 PM
mebbe so, wingy-d. blah some more, pretty please?
replying on Full Fathom Five by vulcan 13 Sep 2002, 12:29 PM
I sent you an email. hope you like it.
replying on Mermaid at Dawn by <~> 13 Sep 2002, 12:02 PM
you the MAN. (uh, make that the 'gay man'...)
replying on pissed off pretentious prat by keatsImnot 13 Sep 2002, 11:59 AM
you got me on that one, wingy-D. still, it trips me up and i think the point could have been made less repetetively; don't you agree, fondlee?
replying on Mermaid at Dawn by <~> 13 Sep 2002, 9:26 AM
thanks, p&k. you're right. ...'s gone now. z
on 9/11 by dougsoderstrom 13 Sep 2002, 9:05 AM
now, was that really necessary, doug? any of it?
on pissed off pretentious prat by keatsImnot 13 Sep 2002, 8:06 AM
nice, but exile/all alone is redundant... uzwyze, nice job
on Full Fathom Five by vulcan 13 Sep 2002, 7:57 AM
this is good, vulcan. may i make a few suggestions, to tighten it up?
replying on We visited the gay men on the veranda by Frass 12 Sep 2002, 9:02 PM
is Frass outing himself (as straight), right here on poemrancor?!!
on Lysander cried by bornagainpoet 12 Sep 2002, 9:01 PM
or with L. from midsummernight's dream? or with the judge?
replying on Mermaid at Dawn by <~> 12 Sep 2002, 8:17 PM
Clarification: i very much like poetandknowit. he is an egotistical arse at times; but i believe that he does it to grate, and so it makes me chuckle instead (most of the time). i just like the way 'p&k' looks better than the all caps version. he's like the jabberwoc, and i'm outgrabe.
replying on My cousin's baby sitter. by Bachus 12 Sep 2002, 6:58 AM
i am not jealous, merely voracious and rapacious. see if handyshandy can twist you up like me; let him try. and what about my confrere, birthmark? you've forgotten us both? since you've donned those angelic beaters, you've taken up airs. you are base. come back to your own.
replying on Gone Away by Christof 12 Sep 2002, 6:17 AM
oh yeah. that was an excellent soultion!!!! only one small stumble, and it is mine only, i am sure: the word 'dead' is leaden. but that is minor.
replying on Gone Away by Christof 12 Sep 2002, 6:05 AM
i'll save my vote for when you've worked it out. it wouldn't be fair to vote on a thing unfinished.k?
replying on Gone Away by Christof 12 Sep 2002, 5:56 AM
it was the last line that didn't work...not the middle.
replying on Gone Away by Christof 12 Sep 2002, 5:53 AM
oh no. don't do that! take out the middle like you just did...you've roughed it up, and pulled out its soul.
replying on Anfal: Our 9/11 happened many times over by kawakurdi 12 Sep 2002, 5:50 AM
well put, mrs.g. that's it exactly.
replying on Anfal: Our 9/11 happened many times over by kawakurdi 11 Sep 2002, 10:35 PM
why would you be banned? did you do something bad? something that, maybe you would't want santa to see? paranoia may destroyahhhh
replying on Anfal: Our 9/11 happened many times over by kawakurdi 11 Sep 2002, 10:31 PM
yes, you're going frass on us. but only a little. i agree with the crux of what you have said, but haven't the balls to put it out there in light of the topic. and i saw your test on the halloween poem, and wondered what that was about...scales fall away evey day, p&k.
on Untitled by ErgoErgun 11 Sep 2002, 10:29 PM
wanting meat is fine, and blood is necessary, but the finest slices can be soaked in their own, and lose their appeal. perhaps it is not want but need you seek?