replying on Mermaid at Dawn by <~>
11 Sep 2002, 10:22 PM
'twas brilling, that last. wine? dine? entwine? supine? brine? blind. toves will gyre and gimbol in the wabe. i warn thee, even as i warm thee.
replying on Epitome of Pathetic by royalflesh
11 Sep 2002, 10:14 PM
o corporeal confrere clothed with sovereign skin, o regal and substantive tease, pen me in lines, if you please
replying on Mermaid at Dawn by <~>
11 Sep 2002, 10:04 PM
i don't like PAKI. it's too harsh on the tongue. i like p&k, and so shall he stay. p.s.--it's the same time in CT. sweet zzz's.
replying on Mermaid at Dawn by <~>
11 Sep 2002, 9:54 PM
which thing would that be, p&k?
replying on Mermaid at Dawn by <~>
11 Sep 2002, 9:52 PM
why shower at 3? you might wake up in a few and want to get dirtier first.
replying on Unwanted Return by PawnedTidal
11 Sep 2002, 9:43 PM
not all of us play at that. but i agree with p&k--leave her be. wash her away, and watch out for her clones.
replying on Mermaid at Dawn by <~>
11 Sep 2002, 9:19 PM
where do I miss, frass?
on A missing puzzle piece. by trev086
11 Sep 2002, 8:21 PM
a whole what?
on Milk & Honey with a touch of PCP <the dead cat edit> by horus8
11 Sep 2002, 7:59 PM
updowside runandhide feathers and beaks, the words he tweaks
and has unleashed on the eyes of men
and women pixellated and fixellated and fornicated and fragmentated
and swirling and dervishing about my ears until in tears
i beg...just one little bite?
and has unleashed on the eyes of men
and women pixellated and fixellated and fornicated and fragmentated
and swirling and dervishing about my ears until in tears
i beg...just one little bite?
but doesn't the calculating make the time go slower? your obsession with her is palpable. 'when i murmur only 5 days, i know it will seem like ten, and that you will leave...again'
(sorry, i can't seem to get past the rhyme in my suggestion, but i do think this could tighten up appreciably.) keep at it. hope these helped. z
(sorry, i can't seem to get past the rhyme in my suggestion, but i do think this could tighten up appreciably.) keep at it. hope these helped. z
replying on My cousin's baby sitter. by Bachus
10 Sep 2002, 4:00 PM
excellent. it's like a spoonful of sugar, or one of doylum's blah blah blah. it makes me all tingly. but, question for you, k:
does it limit the vote to the logged in user, or to the ip? because (as you may have noticed) i log in from about a half dozen places, and i share all o these boxes with others. good thing joe mccarthy's not lookin' over my shoulder, eh?
does it limit the vote to the logged in user, or to the ip? because (as you may have noticed) i log in from about a half dozen places, and i share all o these boxes with others. good thing joe mccarthy's not lookin' over my shoulder, eh?
replying on My cousin's baby sitter. by Bachus
10 Sep 2002, 3:47 PM
that's it. i can't resist your charms any longer. i want, ni i NEED you to come BLAH BLAH BLAH all over one of mine
replying on Lavendar Gate by <~>
10 Sep 2002, 12:43 PM
yes. it was run by anglophiles who subsequently moved to england. it was very much a literary romantic's dream-come-true
replying on Lavendar Gate by <~>
10 Sep 2002, 12:14 PM
yeah. but this is and oldie, dredged up. it's a decade old. the suite was done up in william morris green wallpaper, and it was a garret, so it fits. 'lavendar gate' was a b&b in marblehead, mass. it's now defunct. it was in an old parson's house, right next to the church...
on My cousin's baby sitter. by Bachus
10 Sep 2002, 11:24 AM
and again
on My cousin's baby sitter. by Bachus
10 Sep 2002, 11:23 AM
sorry h. it's tew good to be bad. but here's a cupla zero for you, nonetheless.
replying on Russian Roulette by <~>
9 Sep 2002, 11:39 PM
you always repell me p&k, but isn't that your self-proclaimed M.O.? 'just the blood' is the dual thing again, (the mess, the familial ties), and also because, dammit, it need the word 'just' to justify the structure--1st and last lines ea stanza are their own entities as well, and without 'just' it don't werk that way. yes, the hole is exaggerated in size. you got me. the act is big, so the hole has mirrored it. and in the kitchen, bastion of domesticity...
replying on Russian Roulette by <~>
9 Sep 2002, 11:22 PM
i think that brings it around nicely.
replying on Russian Roulette by <~>
9 Sep 2002, 11:08 PM
i am thinking about making the '5 out of 6' stanza the 1st. any opinions as to how that would read?