| Re: a comment on Russian Roulette by <~> |
9-Sep-02/11:06 PM |
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gracias, amiga. yes, her very own r&r. no helmet, and she often 'forgets' her night glasses, and rides in shades after dark... i'm sure there's a few more chambers, but i've only known her a year now. she is amazing, steel and mayfly...
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| Re: a comment on Russian Roulette by <~> |
9-Sep-02/10:39 PM |
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4 is tighter now, p&k. maybe i'll squeeze it some more tomorrow.
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| Re: Waking Up by PawnedTidal |
9-Sep-02/10:14 PM |
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this one's growing on me...
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| Re: a comment on Russian Roulette by <~> |
9-Sep-02/10:07 PM |
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yes, laugh and crack are intentional repetitions. the second is an empathetic keening; does is make more sense as such, or still weak? you mean the comma by 'undone'? i think it has 2 meanings with the comma in and only one without it...yes. the 4th will be tightened, but this is less than 2 hours old now, so... thanks
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| Re: a comment on Russian Roulette by <~> |
9-Sep-02/9:43 PM |
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sorry Frass, i didn't mean to delete your comment. giddy fingers this late at night, you know. maybe i should be more scard than i am...but, my motto is, always make friends with the bouncers. they have saved my ass a couple of times. i seem to like to ask strangers probing questions, after a coupla pints...especially if the band's good
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| Re: I Love You!! by Babieflirt |
9-Sep-02/9:40 PM |
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OH...MY...GAWD!!! i coulnd't have said it better myself. um, i mean, i couldn't have said it. at least not like this. prithee, Jesu, show mercy, for i have not: 1
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| Re: The Writing Life by poetandknowit |
9-Sep-02/9:37 PM |
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and measures you by the fact that your lawn's not edged...right? this made me laugh. these are the neighbors i grow my dandelions for, p&k.
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| Re: Oaxaca city fragment by poetandknowit |
9-Sep-02/9:35 PM |
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a sharp-edged shard, this is. you paint it clean in my mind.
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| Re: My cousin's baby sitter. by Bachus |
9-Sep-02/9:34 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Russian Roulette by <~> |
9-Sep-02/9:25 PM |
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sometimes, you want to know why they have that qulity, but are afraid to ask. i finally asked her.
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| Re: a comment on The punch drunk underwriter by horus8 |
9-Sep-02/7:14 PM |
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well. my. oh. the things one misses when the site is unstable. most of the time, i quite enjoy the crypic nature of the weavings. this one was well beyond me. the history give me access to it, and i humbly thank you for the lengthy explanation. and i do love access.
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| Re: Chronicled dreams of a silent lover by dilips_10 |
7-Sep-02/3:25 PM |
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this is a beautiful thought.
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| Re: I've got the eaten my crustacean soulmate blues by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
7-Sep-02/3:04 PM |
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i love this poeme. i think i'll marry it. oh, wait. the cat's gotten it. damn.
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| Re: Mean Matt was so mean, when a homeless guy asked him for change he gave him a -blank- by beakism |
7-Sep-02/3:01 PM |
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perhaps it is ben/alex/god...maybe his real name is matt, and maybe he's a dick?
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| Re: More 7-Eleven holdups. by Bachus |
7-Sep-02/1:54 PM |
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it was very wrong. you know they wanted it. plus, they WERE asking for it, weren't they?
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| Re: The punch drunk underwriter by horus8 |
7-Sep-02/1:53 PM |
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what is up with the juvenile rhyming in the first part of 16 lost? guide me, oh ergoted one, for i fail to see the light. oh, and, where do thoughts come from?
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| Re: Trust Exercise by proteusplum |
6-Sep-02/1:38 PM |
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too many cloud-like clouds in 2, other than that, not a cloud in sight.
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| Re: Pagan ME King by proteusplum |
6-Sep-02/1:37 PM |
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i shall hack you to bits and feed you to the birds; i shall bleary my eyes with the smoke of thy pyre; and i will spurt-spit ouzo into the ragingest fire for you, my liege!
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| Re: you first time in my sight by silvertongueddevil |
6-Sep-02/1:01 PM |
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| Re: Crop Circle by Lenore |
6-Sep-02/12:54 PM |
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i like these sounds, but the damn movie has obliterated any objectivity i might have towards the subject.
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