poemranker ::20 most recent comments by <~> (1581-1600) and replies

Comments by<~>, 1581–1600 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on sermon by crin 16 Sep 2002, 7:12 AM
eh. not sure i get how this is a sermon. read 'sinners in the hands of an angry god' by cotton mather, if you want a real sermon. hellfire, man.
on mystery by jlanza 16 Sep 2002, 7:10 AM
ah! the age old tale of ponytails and loss! and silent telephones...one can never rehash these thing enough...or can you?
on Lonely World by rottweiler1982 16 Sep 2002, 7:09 AM
you could get what you came for too, if'n you'd only stop crying alone in the dark, rotty
what triggered you realizing that you will never look at her the same again, p&k?
replying on Morning Glory by waltfreakinwhitman 15 Sep 2002, 7:06 PM
no it's not.
replying on AIDS Bonanza! by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 15 Sep 2002, 4:33 PM
36, y, stratford-upon-housatonic.

where he at?
replying on Tide by <~> 14 Sep 2002, 7:45 AM
well, mojo, it was one of those winters where i was always holding back the tears, and sometimes, no matter how i strained to keep it inside, my eyes would redden, and i'd excuse myself. it really did feel like a tide swelling up inside--and leak is the word for how it came out, because i never stopped fighting the crying. fuck, that was a lousy year.
on Persephone by Lynn 13 Sep 2002, 10:27 PM
Excellent. bloody excellent.
on winter every day (Don't bother reading this) by unknown 13 Sep 2002, 4:56 PM
is the f-ing walk shovelled yet? of course it's not. why would it be? balthazar, how many times have i told you to lose those 3 creeps that are always hanging around, and get some real writing done? and go make me a goddam sammich!
you had me worried for a minute there, b. i thought maybe p&k's fever had been cyber-contracted...
very nice finish. chairs. z
replying on Tide by <~> 13 Sep 2002, 3:59 PM
mojo--crying. that's why it jars. i was crying.
replying on 9/11 by dougsoderstrom 13 Sep 2002, 2:10 PM
it's okay pete. we love doug. that makes everything okay.
on Z higher of arts by ==Doylum 13 Sep 2002, 2:09 PM
well, wingy-d, i wish this was about me... with the Z, and all...but my lips did twist with a wry and merry grin at the clues you his within...even if the scan was off a bit. i won't hold it against ye
replying on Mermaid at Dawn by <~> 13 Sep 2002, 1:54 PM
wouldn't have it any other way, h.
on AIDS Bonanza! by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 13 Sep 2002, 1:43 PM
how does one get an invite to Jools' holiday hootenanny? can you tell me?
please? if i stand outside his window, and serenade him with your fine rhymes, will he grant me admittance?
on Hard Times by beakism 13 Sep 2002, 1:32 PM
has Jesu been out building hotrods AGAIN? didn't god warn him that that would get him in trouble with the LAW?
replying on 9/11 by dougsoderstrom 13 Sep 2002, 1:28 PM
beak, I LOVE YOU MAN!!!!!!!!!!
replying on Mermaid at Dawn by <~> 13 Sep 2002, 1:21 PM
WHERE'S MY BLAH, BLAH, BLAH, DAMMIT!
replying on Mermaid at Dawn by <~> 13 Sep 2002, 1:20 PM
yeah, but he'd still limp it in a man...
on Mother! by kawakurdi 13 Sep 2002, 12:48 PM
and gives an eternal abode for him as well. As a poem, this short piece encapsulates your anguish succinctly, kawakurdi. i feel it when i read it.