| Re: she wonders, by <~> |
23-Aug-02/9:59 AM |
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love song. it's my violin. it's him. it's how i'll make it this winter. your november foothills poem: i don't run to the hills, i drown. this winter, i will drown in her voice, instead of his.
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| Re: she wonders, by <~> |
23-Aug-02/9:50 AM |
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she does indeed want to go there with him, and for him to leave all else behind, and be hers, even if only for the time they are together. she wants this very much, and would gladly pay the price; he cannot afford what i ask...all.
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| Re: she wonders, by <~> |
23-Aug-02/9:39 AM |
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there was more at stake than he and me.
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| Re: Drinking Gravel by unknown |
23-Aug-02/8:24 AM |
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| Re: Painty by wlshepherd |
23-Aug-02/7:55 AM |
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| Re: Sunset Cycle by Jsylum |
23-Aug-02/7:35 AM |
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i like the imagery and ideas expressed, but feel like it would sing with a little editing. work on the last 2 lines a little more? they are not strong enough to close what you have opened.
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| Re: Making Sense in Plain Living by Flaithri |
22-Aug-02/9:05 PM |
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not a gay slayer anymore?
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| Re: {Porn*Star}{Hai*kus} by horus8 |
22-Aug-02/8:57 PM |
this is sharp, by the way, the porn-star haikus. i started integral yoga this week, mostly to cope with that same stress. my diaphragm hurts from the breathing, but i do feel calmer...
fuck, august is hard for me too. you damn leos are my kryptonite.
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| Re: {Porn*Star}{Hai*kus} by horus8 |
22-Aug-02/8:53 PM |
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ah, i am jealous....but not too much. you see, i just came from a dinner at a farm with many friends. we drank chardonnay...much chardonnay...
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| Re: Gilded Stumps of Olde (AN STORY THAT IS NOT AN POEME) by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
22-Aug-02/8:47 PM |
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ah! there are few who could prawne off a tale like this in such a splendid manner! i am glad i saved it until i could fully enjoy it, savor it, as LeChoadk savored his faithful (and squealing) servant. thanks for a rollicking tale, -=Dark_Angel=- !
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| Re: The Matrix by DespondentDotCom |
22-Aug-02/1:35 PM |
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more like a cybergeek wankathon, if you ask me...which you didn't.
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| Re: ode to bad taco meat by gay |
22-Aug-02/1:28 PM |
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are you SURE this isn't the real dark angel? (me thinks it lacks a certain special something...to be HIS)
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| Re: Life On Earth by dougsoderstrom |
22-Aug-02/10:28 AM |
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oh there is a sure and swift way out. i'll be the first to volunteer to help in THAT endeavor...
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| Re: Economics 499 by ErgoErgun |
22-Aug-02/8:53 AM |
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| Re: Bad habits & tramps by horus8 |
22-Aug-02/8:52 AM |
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mind-boggling, and boggle-minded. almost makes you wanna...nevermind. reminds me of that time my friends and i gave that hitchhiker a 'ride home' from woodstock (94)....oh thrills we had...
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| Re: Awesome Heir by Shin-Bojangles |
22-Aug-02/8:30 AM |
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the hobbit is a badtime story, compared to LOTR. give yourself a nice little treat, and read it.
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| Re: life by da_dark_wan |
22-Aug-02/7:38 AM |
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something you should be deprived of?
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| Re: Am I forgiven by da_dark_wan |
22-Aug-02/7:36 AM |
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i can never forgive you for subjecting the world to this crap.
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| Re: Sunshine by alexander |
22-Aug-02/7:35 AM |
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sunshine...on my shoulders...makes me hapeeee...until i have to pay the damn deductible, that is. nice haiku, though.
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| Re: Hunny by Venus |
21-Aug-02/9:25 PM |
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i'll add my voice to the choir venus. this is good stuff.
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