poemranker ::20 most recent comments by bondjedi (41-60) and replies

Comments bybondjedi, 41–60 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on 9/11 by dougsoderstrom 6 Dec 2002, 9:28 AM
mawkish and trite. As substantial as a United Way commercial.
on one word by Blade 6 Dec 2002, 9:22 AM
hackneyed
on An Enchanting Vision of Beauty by dalva 30 Oct 2002, 9:13 PM
This is prose
on James Dean by horus8 30 Oct 2002, 9:13 PM
brilliant
on Life As a Boat by dougsoderstrom 26 Sep 2002, 4:27 PM
the ol' 9-3-1 haiku. of course!
on Conversation with a Clock III by morffrom 26 Sep 2002, 4:24 PM
compact and clever
on Russian Roulette by <~> 20 Sep 2002, 11:57 PM
I would change the title to "5 out of 6 Dentists" or something vague. Otherwise, good poem.
on Frail Monsters/Wounded Souls by Wulf 20 Sep 2002, 11:55 PM
There are as many stanzas to your poem as there were in Jesus' lifetimes, 33.

This poem is 33 stanzas too long.
on Lysander cried by bornagainpoet 20 Sep 2002, 11:53 PM
I doubt your parents are pleased. 2 thumbs down
on recent submissions by <~> 7 Aug 2002, 7:35 PM
too self-aware
on Birth by nentwined 7 Aug 2002, 7:32 PM
return to the womb haikus are cliched
on Dragons by austimb 18 Jul 2002, 5:21 PM
12 sided dice