on Last attempt at "My Father's Dreams" by Joe-joe
22 Sep 2003, 8:06 PM
whisper: joe.. you could cut it by half and actually make it a bomb.
on S.lobster vs. G.madcow by baphomet
13 Sep 2003, 2:47 AM
YOU ARE HORUS!!!!! HORUS!!!! HORUS!!!!!
HAIL LORD BACHUS!!!!
HAIL KING SHARDIK!!!!
WOOO!
lol. bonkers.
HAIL LORD BACHUS!!!!
HAIL KING SHARDIK!!!!
WOOO!
lol. bonkers.
on If I Wrote The Perfect Poem by toward
12 Sep 2003, 6:27 PM
stumbling and rolling around is a good way to learn about the grass.
"its green and soft"
yeah. i know. "Dur"
7
[mental note: dark, im MR. Simpleton, but your MISS FAGGOT.]
"its green and soft"
yeah. i know. "Dur"
7
[mental note: dark, im MR. Simpleton, but your MISS FAGGOT.]
on The Business of Church by <{Baba^Yaga}>
21 Sep 2003, 2:23 PM
a masterpiece. 10
on Yoko and Sakura Make Love by William Delacroix
22 Sep 2003, 6:51 PM
whats this? the perversion of hidden dragon scenes?
on this is your poetry by nentwined
22 Sep 2003, 6:54 PM
masterpiece!!!! 10!!!! WISE BUDDAH SPEAKS!!!
on In the Cold Waste by razorgrin
22 Sep 2003, 8:10 PM
10!!!!
on some deleted poem
22 Sep 2003, 8:12 PM
you dislike this site SOOOO much, but yet you continue to post and come here?
your an idiot.
your an idiot.
on some deleted poem
23 Sep 2003, 9:21 AM
last line.. was bad. but the rest of it was the best ive seen from you joe, good work. you earned the title of poet. 9. happy huntin.
on Last attempt at "My Father's Dreams" by Joe-joe
28 Sep 2003, 12:58 AM
good cutting joe, whats that phrase? "i told you so"
and heres a well deserved eight.
and heres a well deserved eight.
on A spectacular poem by a handsome man by <{Baba^Yaga}>
28 Sep 2003, 1:09 AM
amen. and heres a 10.
hang the song bird
hang the song bird
on A decade and five years of thought. by baphomet
29 Sep 2003, 2:03 AM
skull fucking fantastic
wish i had bigger wings.
wish i had bigger wings.
on I am Jack's Black magic, dude. by Shardik
30 Sep 2003, 10:11 PM
wonderfull stuff- your life is interesting indeed.
9.
9.
on some deleted poem
1 Oct 2003, 9:15 AM
lmao. well, now that was good darkie. 10.
are you two going to get married soon?
will there be icecream and cookies?
(will the church have ramps for your wheelchair?)
these little details are good to know about.
(oh, and where are my lost comments?)
are you two going to get married soon?
will there be icecream and cookies?
(will the church have ramps for your wheelchair?)
these little details are good to know about.
(oh, and where are my lost comments?)
on some deleted poem
3 Oct 2003, 4:25 PM
heh. dont look at me, im not shy to shout
CRAPPY POEM 0 0 0 0!!!
in wonderfull green attire.
you should see my musehearts swimming lessons poem.. it has a ton of blue zeros and even a green one (all of the zeros are musehearts- she didnt appreciate my public overview of her writing..)
theres no point in calling these folks out, since they arent "brave" enough to be upfront with their judgements- most of them.. others just have an obsessive hate for certain poems/poets- welcome to rankerville, its a jungle which is infested with barbarians and tamed animals alike.
btw, heres a six.
CRAPPY POEM 0 0 0 0!!!
in wonderfull green attire.
you should see my musehearts swimming lessons poem.. it has a ton of blue zeros and even a green one (all of the zeros are musehearts- she didnt appreciate my public overview of her writing..)
theres no point in calling these folks out, since they arent "brave" enough to be upfront with their judgements- most of them.. others just have an obsessive hate for certain poems/poets- welcome to rankerville, its a jungle which is infested with barbarians and tamed animals alike.
btw, heres a six.
on Unloyal Poon (Free Puss) by A Spanish Devil by <{Baba^Yaga}>
3 Oct 2003, 4:13 PM
-how a young man is lead to neo-nazism and the kkk...
jealousy and cock size can produce some interesting and unpleasant results.. heh. 8.
jealousy and cock size can produce some interesting and unpleasant results.. heh. 8.
on some deleted poem
3 Oct 2003, 4:17 PM
hey, mr "president"... what about the boogie man, broken down heating systems, wornout and thin blankets
(lets not forget those creapy whisperings and shadows that morph into monsters before my eyes)
jesus christ.
dubbed "dont worry, you dont need to wet the bed little child, its ok, your safe and sound.. *FART*"
2
(lets not forget those creapy whisperings and shadows that morph into monsters before my eyes)
jesus christ.
dubbed "dont worry, you dont need to wet the bed little child, its ok, your safe and sound.. *FART*"
2
on some deleted poem
3 Oct 2003, 4:26 PM
ps: whats your obsession with old world english usage? its corny and.. simply serves little purpose here except to downgrade your work.. in my opinion.
on some deleted poem
3 Oct 2003, 5:00 PM
of lights to drift.
eh? um..
were you rushing this one? it looks like it, because alot of these lines suddenly jump into the next without fluent transition.
ex:
but she slips coyly away
like a bride blushing,
translucent limbs in fluid motion
mesmerising as they pass...
suddenly translucent limbs appear? wouldnt it be better to mention limbs when you start talking about how she slips away?
looks like a rough draft to me.. needs cutting, sorting, and tweaking- 6 for now.
eh? um..
were you rushing this one? it looks like it, because alot of these lines suddenly jump into the next without fluent transition.
ex:
but she slips coyly away
like a bride blushing,
translucent limbs in fluid motion
mesmerising as they pass...
suddenly translucent limbs appear? wouldnt it be better to mention limbs when you start talking about how she slips away?
looks like a rough draft to me.. needs cutting, sorting, and tweaking- 6 for now.
on some deleted poem
3 Oct 2003, 5:05 PM
heh.. i like the spurt of cls related writes.. but its beginning to lose flamesparks.. hrmm.. well, shit, since cls poems are in vogue all of a sudden, im going to move the jesusfreak parody up into recents for the occassion.
7.
7.