on Dancing on Glass by thepinkbunnyofdoom
13 Oct 2003, 5:24 PM
bunny wabbit, ltns. ace poem btw. 9.
on some deleted poem
13 Oct 2003, 8:24 PM
nice. did terrorists blow up the moon.. one day theyll do that too.
9.
9.
on Before My Mother's Thighs (A free purse) by Spanish Devil by Jeremi B. Handrinos
3 Oct 2003, 11:19 PM
your certainly on a mission, thats for sure.
hows your night?
hows your night?
on Aluminum Shackles - Titanium Quills by SupremeDreamer
4 Oct 2003, 8:51 AM
Long debate.. and darky, heres some deleting!
im sure you can post the soon to be MIA comments for all to behold.
im sure you can post the soon to be MIA comments for all to behold.
on Often, I'll sit down to pee by Jeremi B. Handrinos
4 Oct 2003, 6:52 AM
does she have pony tails and a mini-skirt?
8.
8.
on some deleted poem
3 Oct 2003, 11:40 PM
tender? the sun might be colored like an apricot, but i dont think id risk taking a bite: teeth can melt.
tender, then mentioning soft infant bellies.. perhaps overdoing the details can get redundant, make your point and tighten the output..
how the poem sparks and bangs makes a huge impact on how it affects the reader.
tender, then mentioning soft infant bellies.. perhaps overdoing the details can get redundant, make your point and tighten the output..
how the poem sparks and bangs makes a huge impact on how it affects the reader.
on The Swallower (Oh brother!) by Spanish Devil by Bachus
3 Oct 2003, 11:09 PM
ah horus, i fear i might be getting a tad soft
but, thankfully your always at attention with parody musicals..hrmm, there must always be carnivores to do vegan population controll, or a bell man with the most painful copper echos.
does my "im being gentle" mask suit me? or do i need to get more goddamn plaster and better molds?
as usual, your satire is a well crafted stand up session- 10.
but, thankfully your always at attention with parody musicals..hrmm, there must always be carnivores to do vegan population controll, or a bell man with the most painful copper echos.
does my "im being gentle" mask suit me? or do i need to get more goddamn plaster and better molds?
as usual, your satire is a well crafted stand up session- 10.
on some deleted poem
3 Oct 2003, 11:15 PM
hrmm. your point could be made clearer with a tad more simplicity in language.. course, im not one to discourage dictionary exploration
(webster is annoyed, ive ripped many corners and smudged the occasional few letters.)
but- the thing to keep in mind is: what is your goal? abstract, straightforward, inbetween? etc.
for now, i give a 7.
(webster is annoyed, ive ripped many corners and smudged the occasional few letters.)
but- the thing to keep in mind is: what is your goal? abstract, straightforward, inbetween? etc.
for now, i give a 7.
on Aluminum Shackles - Titanium Quills by SupremeDreamer
4 Oct 2003, 2:56 AM
oh my.. im really fired up.. notepad shall be sore before the day is done..
on Who are the best poets on poemranker? (A list by me) by Jeremi B. Handrinos
4 Oct 2003, 3:23 AM
aye, i made the list..
and ive only just gotten out my slump
pleasantly surprised.
but i liked the intro much more, i like nodding profusely. the list rocks, and i there arent many that could replace you as judge.
anyway, enough yammering- i have to catch the next updraft and fly again (i didnt get these damned wings for nothing)
and ive only just gotten out my slump
pleasantly surprised.
but i liked the intro much more, i like nodding profusely. the list rocks, and i there arent many that could replace you as judge.
anyway, enough yammering- i have to catch the next updraft and fly again (i didnt get these damned wings for nothing)
on Aluminum Shackles - Titanium Quills by SupremeDreamer
4 Oct 2003, 8:53 AM
one lil x button.. its like playstation "ya know"
bazooka'd city hall while nuking the white house
coooool eh?
bazooka'd city hall while nuking the white house
coooool eh?
on Aluminum Shackles - Titanium Quills by SupremeDreamer
4 Oct 2003, 8:58 AM
btw folks, its bad to have these loose ends like cuisine, because its a sign of some odd little blemish that will lead to some scandal. beware.
Oh, and folks, "i have just covered up the proof of my retardation"
BUT- getting all comments via email means that.. i can really post it all.. anyone want me to do that?
(copy pasting from IE is quite easy, i just need to get the order of the messages right.. )
Oh, and folks, "i have just covered up the proof of my retardation"
BUT- getting all comments via email means that.. i can really post it all.. anyone want me to do that?
(copy pasting from IE is quite easy, i just need to get the order of the messages right.. )
on Primal Reality by peaceseeker
8 Oct 2003, 12:14 AM
what the hell is with the short lines? its damned annoying to read it in that fashion- specially since i dont see its purpose, and its written in a fashion where jaggedness doesnt suit it.
my only complaint- blessed with 7.
my only complaint- blessed with 7.
on some deleted poem
8 Oct 2003, 12:16 AM
Quite a tasty write. blessed with 8.
on some deleted poem
8 Oct 2003, 12:26 AM
Carmelites were MEN.. friars..
i dont think they had a nunnery.
this is too loaded with mush.. bleh. 2.
i dont think they had a nunnery.
this is too loaded with mush.. bleh. 2.
on My Instructions or My Tongue In My Cheek? by Patsy
8 Oct 2003, 12:32 AM
quite good, id say. blessed with 9.
on Evel Knievel's last bananna split   by horus8
21 Oct 2003, 4:44 PM
enjoyable read, blessed with 9.
on Nathan - under the sun by SupremeDreamer
24 Oct 2003, 12:41 AM
rest in peace.
on Nothing beat the 90's for An over view of American culture by Shardik
24 Oct 2003, 3:24 PM
look who gets the last laugh.. hrmm. wonderfull. 10