on The Santa Anna's fire and red sun by Bachus
29 Oct 2003, 5:08 PM
awesome, quite enjoyable.
on Experimental Robot Questionaire by horus8
27 Oct 2003, 4:28 PM
Hrmm.. the matrix research project?
PK's AI would require a bottle of rum, three joints, the mobile meth stash, a copy of this piece, since its fucking funny- the conversation will definately require spicing of this sort.
10!
PK's AI would require a bottle of rum, three joints, the mobile meth stash, a copy of this piece, since its fucking funny- the conversation will definately require spicing of this sort.
10!
on comment-ary by nentwined
27 Oct 2003, 4:30 PM
well shit, i think im getting to really like these haikus, nice work. 9
on Teaching Beetles To Swim by Bobjim
27 Oct 2003, 4:37 PM
Frankly, i hate insects.. for no reason either, but i respect some, untill they get near me and drive me to conduct a murder of bugs. I should do some self therapy perhaps, and find out why they bother me.. maybe one crawled near my diaper as a kid, or whatever.
ok, onto the subject at hand:
This needs to be edited a bit.. looks rough to me.
6 for now, toodles.
ok, onto the subject at hand:
This needs to be edited a bit.. looks rough to me.
6 for now, toodles.
on A Truth About Mortals by Caducus
6 Nov 2003, 7:44 AM
Well- it bored me, and if this was written to convey that things are not what they seem, you could of written perhaps 4 lines at the most and spared readers from being seriously mislead.
-shrug-
-shrug-
on At least while you're gone, things get done. by Bachus
6 Nov 2003, 9:56 AM
Nice lil tweak with monday, you always manage some method of keeping the form intact when you start to slide a bit off course.
Damned good vil. 9
Damned good vil. 9
on some deleted poem
6 Nov 2003, 9:59 AM
The best one I have seen from you, well done.
Blessed with 10.
Blessed with 10.
on I AM THE BEST by ____________________
6 Nov 2003, 11:35 AM
settle...?
that or someone that has studied his works extensively.
that or someone that has studied his works extensively.
on I don't like fish by INTRANSIT
6 Nov 2003, 1:08 PM
Bad sushi.. did you ask yourself if you had gills first? could have been a good idea.
Heres an eight.
Heres an eight.
on Pot Haikus (Ode to Stoners) by Shardik
6 Nov 2003, 1:43 PM
that sparks alot of memories.. first one is the best.
Stoner 9 award.
Stoner 9 award.
on Memory by SILYLILGURL
6 Nov 2003, 2:43 PM
... im guessing that you had no inspiration for your writing today? Might look nice in your journal though.
blessed with 0.
blessed with 0.
on some deleted poem
6 Nov 2003, 3:34 PM
You know, my dad told me that one can have a job like the rest of the good citizens and still retain ones individuality.
Not being mean, but I really think the titles you come up with really need more creative influence.. but thats me, and heres a 5.
Not being mean, but I really think the titles you come up with really need more creative influence.. but thats me, and heres a 5.
on some deleted poem
6 Nov 2003, 3:39 PM
I suggest calling this: Suburbanite Anthem. Heres a 7, and exactly why do you have to go heavy on the depressed drama element? Its cramping your work, but again my opinions are just my own view.
on some deleted poem
6 Nov 2003, 3:40 PM
Seems that you've decided to stick to a pattern here.. obsessing are we?
on some deleted poem
6 Nov 2003, 3:42 PM
End of the road, and mid-age crisis in full bloom.
on some deleted poem
6 Nov 2003, 8:11 PM
forget the shovel- use dynamite, save digging for the customer.
Could be tweaked here and there, overall i bless you with a seven.
Could be tweaked here and there, overall i bless you with a seven.
on Marrowless highway by INTRANSIT
6 Nov 2003, 8:18 PM
Blessed with eight, go in peace.
on Awefucked by a Shushin Shitzu (freefuck) by <{Baba^Yaga}>
7 Nov 2003, 10:29 PM
Fuckling- neato. Overall: very bacchanal.
Blessed with 8.
Blessed with 8.