on some deleted poem
7 Nov 2003, 10:51 PM
...looks like you went heavy on the padding.
on Got Spilk? By a concerned white Christian 'man'. by Bachus
7 Nov 2003, 10:59 PM
Bravo! The poolpike has been born! Blessed with 9.
on I Found a Box... by leviathan
7 Nov 2003, 11:04 PM
"If these cardboard walls could speak"
Blessed with 9.
Blessed with 9.
on 7 Days of Suicide by dragonfly
7 Nov 2003, 11:17 PM
i think of ways to commit murder and make it look like a freak accident. everyones different ofcourse, heres a seven.
on The lasts of Joe by Freethinker1602
8 Nov 2003, 4:26 PM
Hide? Grow nut hair and give her a kiss already.
Blessed with 4.
Blessed with 4.
on Givin' in by Freethinker1602
8 Nov 2003, 4:32 PM
I said that once, but then I got a nine inch nail in me bumcheeck and quickly got up.
Last Days become another Beginning, and fate was written with a pencil- get yourself JesusCream - White Out Made To Erase Sin!! (Gods Pen belongs to me, sorry-I stole that and his Buddha Joint)
heres a 6.
Last Days become another Beginning, and fate was written with a pencil- get yourself JesusCream - White Out Made To Erase Sin!! (Gods Pen belongs to me, sorry-I stole that and his Buddha Joint)
heres a 6.
on some deleted poem
8 Nov 2003, 4:36 PM
Can I cut the work by 90% and use my DreamBlender with turbo-frappe?
Blessed with seven.
Blessed with seven.
on some deleted poem
8 Nov 2003, 4:39 PM
Cold streets can boil when they feel freshly spilled blood. Blessed with 8.
on an early discovery (reworking) by richa
8 Nov 2003, 4:42 PM
Pity the trees that stoop- 10.
on Greybie Blue by abecedarian
8 Nov 2003, 4:45 PM
polyamorist isnt in my dictionary.. exactly what does it mean?
Aside from that, I bless you with 7.
Aside from that, I bless you with 7.
on Sandpaper reminds me of your ashes by SupremeDreamer
8 Nov 2003, 6:47 PM
I just couldnt resist.. plus today I didn't feel like making a sonnet- I've become addicted to the vilanelle.
on take me home by New Life Drug
8 Nov 2003, 11:09 PM
You know what that means?
Gills are next on your "need to get" list. Blessed with seven- btw, you mix well with my meth injection.
Gills are next on your "need to get" list. Blessed with seven- btw, you mix well with my meth injection.
on Love (pyramus and thisbe) by New Life Drug
8 Nov 2003, 11:11 PM
Blessed with 6.
on some deleted poem
14 Nov 2003, 2:23 AM
dusting up the old works, its amazing how poems look after you write them- and how different they become with age.
whats also amazing? how many mistakes you see when looking back at them.
whats also amazing? how many mistakes you see when looking back at them.
on Something I Hope I Would Not Hear Myself Speak by Lifeboatman
14 Nov 2003, 2:30 AM
long time, no see- ive missed your works, and enjoyed this one- even though its pencrap to you.
bust seats- slightly confusing, but i understand what you mean, i hope: empty seats? (bust- adj, lacking funds?)
well anyway, heres an 8.
bust seats- slightly confusing, but i understand what you mean, i hope: empty seats? (bust- adj, lacking funds?)
well anyway, heres an 8.
on some deleted poem
14 Nov 2003, 2:37 AM
Aye.. the title: cliche
language used: teenage aching heart with added cliche drama.
and worst of all: you used bittersweet? i did that too once, and then smashed my face into a wall.
then you repeated it.
If your going to do mush, then atleast make it good- or close to it..
this poem would be great as a pimple. heres a 4.
language used: teenage aching heart with added cliche drama.
and worst of all: you used bittersweet? i did that too once, and then smashed my face into a wall.
then you repeated it.
If your going to do mush, then atleast make it good- or close to it..
this poem would be great as a pimple. heres a 4.
on Those weeks I slit my wrists to the Smiths by Jeremi B. Handrinos
14 Nov 2003, 2:41 AM
well, not too bad, not the best you could have done though.
Blessed with 8.
Blessed with 8.
on some deleted poem
14 Nov 2003, 2:53 AM
longed long- this disrupts the flow a bit, to me anyway.
its fingers- also nuked my reading flow, was sudden and i lost track of what you were saying.
overall? i like it, hope to see revisions though.
blessed with 8.
its fingers- also nuked my reading flow, was sudden and i lost track of what you were saying.
overall? i like it, hope to see revisions though.
blessed with 8.
on paint me a poem (try 2) by nentwined
14 Nov 2003, 3:06 AM
I love it. really, i do.
10.
10.
on Outhouse by newagepoet2000
14 Nov 2003, 10:53 AM
675? Close enough I guess.
blessed with 4.
Oh, and not to be rude.. but your nick makes mine seem smashin, really- I can't keep from giggling everytime I read "new age poet" since the first thought that pops up in my head is: "whats that? virgin hippies meet MDMA+pantheism?"
No offense intended, just being liberal with my opinion.
blessed with 4.
Oh, and not to be rude.. but your nick makes mine seem smashin, really- I can't keep from giggling everytime I read "new age poet" since the first thought that pops up in my head is: "whats that? virgin hippies meet MDMA+pantheism?"
No offense intended, just being liberal with my opinion.