Comments bySupremeDreamer, 701–720 back. Include replies

on The Umpteenth Home by EAger to Offend 14 Jul 2003, 11:08 PM
Solid piece. 8.
on Slip by Terence 18 Jul 2003, 8:56 PM
Damn good writing. 10.
on Paean by Terence 18 Jul 2003, 9:03 PM
Its a cute lil piece, the only thing i really liked was the oyster/pearl bit.. reminds me of a poem i wrote when i was 15. blessed with 8. welcome to the ranker!
on beyond sences by calilegzzz 18 Jul 2003, 9:06 PM
I like it.. but i think it could have been better written/presented. 7.
on Federales by Bachus 18 Jul 2003, 9:09 PM
The rubber glove snaps
As I bend to touch my toes
Liquid burritos

-- i love this stanza.. ;P 9.
on Mistaken Paradise by DJCARTER 18 Jul 2003, 9:47 PM
alas.. if this was written better, i would love it.. but im forced to bless it with 7, not higher.. ;(
on SANATORIUM by Tahlia 12 Jul 2003, 3:59 AM
ah, yes, beautifull.. flows to my soul.. 10. ;)
on a Waste of Space by thepinkbunnyofdoom 16 Jul 2003, 10:18 PM
Um.. cmon you damned lil pink rodent, you should be improving, not writing the mumbles of a sickened rabbit suffering poetic rejection... 3
on Humans by snjofridur1 16 Jul 2003, 10:23 PM
lol.. well.. repulsive, slightly amusing and well written.. 7.
on rainday by Bill Z Bub 15 Jul 2003, 7:47 PM
I liked this poem, cept "survivalling".. its just strange.. 9
on Scarecrow by horus8 15 Jul 2003, 8:03 PM
are you going to make an mp3 out of this? id love to hear it. 10
hrmm... that vegetarian line sounds out of place for some reason...
on some deleted poem 14 Jul 2003, 11:12 PM
Its definately my type of coffee... black and bitter, sugar cubes dissolved in destructive fury, its knife the blade of a water fountain. 9
on A Brand New Eye by EAger to Offend 14 Jul 2003, 11:17 PM
Blessed with 9.
on In the Vicinity of Dreams by Blue Magpie 14 Jul 2003, 11:22 PM
Bravo! 10
on SILENT ECHOES by Tahlia 14 Jul 2003, 11:36 PM
Amen, Amen... thou art blessed with 10.
on Death In The Cherry Brook Nursing Home by scitz 15 Jul 2003, 6:43 AM
Sid is such a bastard. 8 shall be thy blessing.
on Death In The Cherry Brook Nursing Home by scitz 15 Jul 2003, 7:28 AM
bastard is the term i use for this particular type of person.. because its a dead man walking like a ghost, im not trying to be an ass ;/
on Ode to a Pizza Hut Roach by http://mulberryfairy 12 Jul 2003, 7:59 AM
Pretty good read, managed to make a roach interesting to read about. blessed with 9.
on some deleted poem 12 Jul 2003, 7:54 AM
Over used rhyme, very little detail and imaginative writing... I've seen millions that look just like this. Don't get all pissed over my opinion, I'm just going on the quality of the poem. Blessed with a two.