| Re: Things by MrsGretchen |
7-Jul-03/8:07 PM |
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Not bad, good work. It could use a better introduction though.. and a better title. heres a 7
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| Re: 910 Via Padova, Claremont, Ca. (Mike Piazza Edit) by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
7-Jul-03/8:09 PM |
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hrmmm. cool adaptation yoda. ;P 9.
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| Re: vacation by geewhiz1962 |
7-Jul-03/8:16 PM |
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the rewrite is alot better than the original. heres an 8. btw, you really need to have a better attitude concerning commentry, because changing titles to erase a low vote is a pathetic response. Plus, giving me a low rating when i respond to it by sticking a zero on your work is childish... doesnt make you look intelligent. dont take this comment to be pompous in nature, but i do admit sadly that it does seem that way. Im just trying to give you some advice not to step on you, but to help you.
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| Re: Freedom & Then some... by horus8 |
7-Jul-03/8:27 PM |
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this poem kicks ass. i really loved the html introduction. blessed with a 10.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
8-Jul-03/9:54 PM |
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She? damn you bastages. Im a man! ;P heres an 8, would be a nine if you reconized my manhood. ;x
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| Re: Stealing lightning from the pulpit by horus8 |
10-Jul-03/1:24 AM |
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oki doki... hrmm could i use this to make me sword a lightsaber? ;P
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| Re: Nigger Hole by horus8 |
10-Jul-03/1:33 AM |
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| Re: The Ebony Orchid of Theta by Shardik |
10-Jul-03/1:44 AM |
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Beautiful poem man, i think of all the poems ive read of yours i like this one the most. 10
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| Re: The Ebony Orchid of Theta by Shardik |
10-Jul-03/2:26 AM |
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I was wondering about the title, particularly the theta bit.. what does theta represent or mean?
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
10-Jul-03/3:05 AM |
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"tomomentary"- should be a space inbetween to and momentary.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
10-Jul-03/3:07 AM |
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um.. attempt at humor failed man... or atleast didnt manage to tickle my funny bone.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
11-Jul-03/5:51 PM |
Um.. cmon man, if your going to attack me, atleast be creative about it, i mean fucking a.. this is sad man, i dont even need to defend myself, i just have to let you do the work for me with this shit.
And whats the obsession you have with anal sex, aids, homosexuality and fucking my ear? Its not even remotely humorouse, I can't even laugh at it since its so poorly carried out..
here, have a zero. I usually like to be able to give my attackers better scores than this, but you disappoint me.
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| Re: TPBOD Joins a pack of wolves by Luzr |
11-Jul-03/6:04 PM |
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Muahahaha. Funny little story, i liked it alot. ;P 10.
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| Re: Skull fucking Miggy, a list, by Iggy Poppy by Bachus |
12-Jul-03/2:41 AM |
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It tickled my poetic thought process. ;] blessed with 8.
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| Re: Untitled by helpfulpoems |
12-Jul-03/3:19 AM |
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Hrmm.. I wasn't aware that we had 12 year olds posting stuff here.... blessed with a three.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
12-Jul-03/3:23 AM |
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hrmm.. this poems spark doesn't manage to ignite my fuel, but its well written. Blessed with 7.
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12-Jul-03/3:27 AM |
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not colourfull really.. written with a tired theme and helped me to fall asleep two times in the middle of reading it.. 5.
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12-Jul-03/3:29 AM |
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jagged one-word-at-a-time code that reads like the speech of someone who stutters badly.. blessed with 6.
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12-Jul-03/3:31 AM |
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better than the rest, still doesnt have much variety concerning expression or imaginative detail. Blessed with eight.
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| Re: Performer by http://mulberryfairy |
12-Jul-03/3:51 AM |
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Very mellow read, i enjoyed it alot. blessed with nine.
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