poemranker ::20 most recent comments by nentwined (381-400) and replies

Comments bynentwined, 381–400 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on Distastefully Hairy Quendo by w╞╦╩╤╦╩╣
╠╤╦╧╩╡w 21 Dec 2004, 12:53 PM
I think the second It's should be spelled out, for rhythmic purposes.

Unless you're shouting it, then it's all clean in the wash.
on A smile by Bobjim 16 Dec 2004, 1:12 PM
It's a thing that you do with your face, when both corners of your mouth are upturned and the middle of your mouth is relatively relaxed. Sort of. Maybe.
replying on keep on digging by nentwined 9 Nov 2004, 1:18 PM
Better than most, then. :)
replying on The huntsman's shame by Stephen Robins 9 Nov 2004, 2:30 AM
Is there a redoubtable checkliste of colossal member-ness nowe?
on In the office by phauge 8 Nov 2004, 7:58 PM
I like s4.

death, love, pain, and loss--
these are the thoughts in my mind
while in the office
on Where I work by phauge 8 Nov 2004, 7:53 PM
go clock go. :)
on Down by phauge 8 Nov 2004, 7:52 PM
is there anything in particular you're trying to convey with this?
on Silly sickness by fevriere 8 Nov 2004, 4:51 PM
I get the overwhelmed but not much else. Guesses, but they're pretty random.
replying on keep on digging by nentwined 8 Nov 2004, 3:34 PM
wow. cutting they really does something. :) I'll probably do so.

I certainly didn't intend a list of diggables.

I'm glad you appreciate. :)
replying on Beyond Love by Dovina 8 Nov 2004, 2:23 PM
I definitely don't want a book; I wouldn't get past the first chapter before killing either the book or myself.
on Grandma's Prayer/Lord Reply by jroday 8 Nov 2004, 1:40 PM
cute last line with the setup. weak setup.
on Heather Graham by Bachus 8 Nov 2004, 1:34 PM
oy.
on Beyond Love by Dovina 8 Nov 2004, 1:31 PM
This needs more development for me. I want to experience vicariously the depths of ennui.
replying on The huntsman's shame by Stephen Robins 8 Nov 2004, 1:12 PM
I guess I forget where I was. Next one I read was a zero as well.
on Daddy's Never There by angelmami17 8 Nov 2004, 1:11 PM
I see.
on The huntsman's shame by Stephen Robins 8 Nov 2004, 1:10 PM
congratulations. first 0 I've read in some time. :)
on Bad Year by Miggy 8 Nov 2004, 12:58 PM
I'm afraid I can't tell what you're saying here.
on Smoke by zodiac 8 Nov 2004, 12:56 PM
Head hurts, yes. Can't quite follow every line. Yet I like it greatly. I think I've got a measure of the whole of it. No suggestions on where I fall. Something to be read and re-read.
on Intersection by INTRANSIT 5 Nov 2004, 9:17 PM
hello again. :)
on A Fistful of Ass Haiku by HaikuMofo 22 Sep 2004, 2:08 PM
asstasstic.

bonus points for the form of ass, and paradox, and continuity.