on I Am a Snob, or, 'A Definition' by JakeBike
14 Jul 2003, 4:30 PM
necessity
on Border towns & the runs by horus8
17 Jul 2003, 9:03 AM
good-8
on some deleted poem
14 Jul 2003, 2:41 PM
knee slapper! - <shweet>
on In the Vicinity of Dreams by Blue Magpie
13 Jul 2003, 5:48 PM
wholesome, and romantic
on Lullaby (Finding Peace) by Miggy
13 Jul 2003, 6:06 PM
"i like it"-
on Aluminum Xena - Prima Ballerina by SupremeDreamer
15 Jul 2003, 7:31 AM
for some reason I feel like it needs some tweaking. But, I like the visuals. sharp!
on some deleted poem
15 Jul 2003, 8:44 AM
for some reason the last line bugs me.. "so its back to the city, and dancing to be flowers"..7
on thought & memory by Bill Z Bub
14 Jul 2003, 2:38 PM
abyss-like. (deep)
on some deleted poem
14 Jul 2003, 9:50 AM
like butter...excellent!
on SILENT ECHOES by Tahlia
14 Jul 2003, 8:08 AM
a blip of emotion..extend.
on Not Being Me by pinay_miss_azn
10 Jul 2004, 6:25 PM
because feeling cold is the only way we can remember what it feels like to be warm. And HOW you are is very different than WHO you are. I would work on the WHO part and let the HOW follow. Keep it up. It sounds like you have a lot more to let out.
on Friends Forever? by nicole081083
10 Jul 2004, 6:44 PM
quick poem.
on some deleted poem
27 Jun 2004, 10:12 AM
hmm..smooth.
on some deleted poem
17 Jun 2004, 5:35 PM
my frown is upside down.