on some deleted poem
20 Aug 2003, 12:07 PM
I like it, but something slipped somewhere in the middle. I'm not sure what it was. You're very good though. I can tell you're a very educated person. One of lyrical caliber to be reckoned with.
on Love-Anemic by dragonfly
20 Aug 2003, 12:58 PM
This poem is great. If I were you, I would keep it close to me and maybe rework it a few different ways just to see where it takes you. It has the essence of a def poetry performance for sure!
on Perversions 5: Kink vs. Mothra by razorgrin
20 Aug 2003, 1:08 PM
Did you write this or did someone else? Instead of inserting a phrase explaining your spelling errors, why not just take the time to use spell check?
on Memorial Park by Mona Lisa
20 Aug 2003, 11:47 AM
nice
on A gift by Birdman42s
20 Aug 2003, 11:47 AM
kind of cliche'
on I Am a Snob, or, 'A Definition' by JakeBike
20 Aug 2003, 11:49 AM
very educational.
on some deleted poem
20 Aug 2003, 11:51 AM
very nice. I like the way it flows and closes.
on ? by Crakyamuni
20 Aug 2003, 11:53 AM
I like this poem very much. It has emotion, fluid verse, and sort of...kind of reminds me of when I scratch a chaulk board for fun.
on I'll be your Gimp by GAY AS FU*K
20 Aug 2003, 12:10 PM
Very interesting. Expressive in a provocative and unrelenting manor.
on Dance With Me by marvelis
20 Aug 2003, 11:52 AM
too cliche' for me.