on on passing through some small town by Dental Panic
4 Oct 2005, 7:00 PM
I like it, funny, 8.5
replying on The Servant and The Messenger by ALChemy
4 Oct 2005, 6:51 PM
I like the first 3 lines the best. I think you might like the poetry of St. John of the Cross.
I noticed in your comments to people that you said you "shun the idea that God would rather speak to us through angels and preachers than simply directly through our own hearts." Yet you quote the Bible and speak of the Summa? What is wrong with God using things or people to speak to us. . .to our hearts even? Maybe that is the way He prefers to speak to our hearts at times and at other times He does it without any of this. Maybe He choses the how and not us. It would make sense afterall that He set it up however it is He does it if He is God.
I noticed in your comments to people that you said you "shun the idea that God would rather speak to us through angels and preachers than simply directly through our own hearts." Yet you quote the Bible and speak of the Summa? What is wrong with God using things or people to speak to us. . .to our hearts even? Maybe that is the way He prefers to speak to our hearts at times and at other times He does it without any of this. Maybe He choses the how and not us. It would make sense afterall that He set it up however it is He does it if He is God.
on The Man with the Fiberglass Head by MacFrantic
29 Sep 2005, 8:03 PM
I like it
on Johnny by MacFrantic
29 Sep 2005, 7:40 PM
I would like to hear it read
on Life Before Birth by GregDeEgg
17 Sep 2005, 9:31 PM
:)
on Listless Nights by blindwriter
4 Apr 2005, 9:29 PM
I love it. . .it's like I can see the picture you painted with the poem in my mind
replying on Prayer For The Church by sliver
4 Apr 2005, 9:20 PM
Well, if they were truely Catholic in their prayers, they most likely would have been praying for whatever God-willed. . .even if that meant their own deaths.
(you know, like Jesus during His Passion when He asked more than once for His suffering to be taken away. . .unless it be the will of His Father)
(you know, like Jesus during His Passion when He asked more than once for His suffering to be taken away. . .unless it be the will of His Father)
replying on Prayer For The Church by sliver
3 Apr 2005, 1:20 PM
Dark. . . it has something to do with the well known saying "ask and you shall recieve"
on the victory by oneglove
23 Mar 2005, 7:00 PM
love the topic but I've seen your other poems and I bet you could make it flow a lot better
on a study in blossoms and beauty by oneglove
23 Mar 2005, 6:52 PM
Dang! I like it is an understatement
on Tribulations of the ear and eye by oneglove
23 Mar 2005, 6:49 PM
That was fun to read!
on melancholy: by Sapphire
21 Mar 2005, 8:53 PM
nice
replying on "America The Beautiful" by jroday
16 Mar 2005, 5:21 PM
somehow I am skeptical
on Social Awarness by midnitebeauty101
16 Mar 2005, 5:19 PM
is this a true story?
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on This path by midnitebeauty101
16 Mar 2005, 5:18 PM
I don't sense much feeling in the poem, but I bet you have a lot more you could put into it?
on Broken by midnitebeauty101
16 Mar 2005, 5:16 PM
I really like the first 6 lines, and the last four lines except the very last one . . .I'll have to check out some of your other poems eh
replying on Religious Slaughter by Beyond_Dreams
13 Mar 2005, 1:16 PM
What would you die for?. . .
This war in Iraq is nothing like the crusades.
This war in Iraq is nothing like the crusades.
on The Runaway by bamf909
28 Feb 2005, 11:29 PM
More, more, give us more. . .I like your poems