poemranker ::20 most recent comments by tadpole (61-80) and replies

Comments bytadpole, 61–80 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on I'm Aboard by Ali_cat018 2 Oct 2003, 12:37 PM
I like the train metaphor, I would suggest working some more train related words in there and maybe working with the flow a little
on paper boats by sally6479 27 Sep 2003, 10:18 PM
I like some of the ideas and the memories that you are talking about, but it kind of falls apart and rambles a little towards the end. I bet you could put it together better.
on personality by irishfolksuicide 25 Sep 2003, 9:44 PM
made me snicker.
on sewer rat by irishfolksuicide 25 Sep 2003, 9:42 PM
never thought I could like a poem about a rat so much!
replying on Here I go again by tadpole 25 Sep 2003, 9:34 PM
appreciate the response, thanks
on Boy by clark187 24 Sep 2003, 2:42 PM
cute, like the parts about it being like a painting or pastel drawing
replying on Plum diggity by tadpole 14 Sep 2003, 7:18 AM
Well it is usually found only around this time of year
Furthermore, you profile indicates that you could find some near
. . .
on If I Wrote The Perfect Poem by toward 12 Sep 2003, 2:01 PM
I like it!
on Recycle by Patsy 7 Sep 2003, 9:58 AM
(same comment as for your "30,000 Feet" poem)
on 30,000 feet by Patsy 7 Sep 2003, 9:55 AM
I don't really understand it but part of it I find myself liking. . .what is it all about?
on Why by J.B. Manning 7 Sep 2003, 9:53 AM
I like how it flows. . .but suggest that maybe the last line should be directed elsewhere.
on 'Till Then by sliver 7 Sep 2003, 9:45 AM
How do you write like that! I really like how you almost trick the reader to think you are talking about something else and then leave them with a tear in their eye. . .well at least me
on Boy's Hell by shadowaura 5 Sep 2003, 11:32 AM
pretty good
PS ignore SupremeDreamer it's better that way
replying on Plum diggity by tadpole 4 Sep 2003, 7:31 PM
you wouldn't say that if you tasted it
on Driftwood by GekoHawaii 4 Sep 2003, 4:09 PM
oh man, I really like this one, I'll have to read more of yours
replying on none by tadpole 4 Sep 2003, 2:59 PM
thanks, maybe I'll try and rewrite it sometime
on cold sonnet by <~> 4 Sep 2003, 2:59 PM
really really like it, just a little wordy in some parts for me
replying on none by tadpole 3 Sep 2003, 4:07 PM
yeah it was kinda rushed, thanks for the honesty. . .about doing better, I just wrote it to put something on here since it wasn't fair for me to comment on everyone's without them having a chance to comment or rip on mine. . .I don't know if I'll write anymore
replying on none by tadpole 3 Sep 2003, 3:56 PM
whoops, yeah I see it now
replying on none by tadpole 3 Sep 2003, 3:55 PM
thanks, I don't have anymore