poemranker ::20 most recent comments by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? (161-180)

Comments by?-Dave_Mysterious-?, 161–180 back. Include replies

on some deleted poem 28 Sep 2003, 5:16 PM
Suck
You suck
You really suck bigtime
on Pin worms and cake. by baphomet 28 Sep 2003, 5:30 PM
15/35 = 3/7
on AND A NICE CUP OF CHAR by Garrett S Sexton 26 Sep 2003, 4:23 PM
I smoke Lambert and Butler. Otherwise accurate. -9-
on The Light by the_unknown_angel83 25 Sep 2003, 4:38 PM
How can you live with yourself knowing that you wrote this poem?
on ME AGAIN by oldschool 25 Sep 2003, 4:40 PM
What school did you go to? I was at Eton.
on some deleted poem 25 Sep 2003, 4:47 PM
You need to abridge this by a further eight lines.
on some deleted poem 25 Sep 2003, 5:06 PM
Did you know that John Cleese's real name is John Cheese?

-9-

(It would be 10, but half the lines don't scan properly)
on some deleted poem 25 Sep 2003, 5:34 PM
When I was about 10, "space-ship" was a word for a floater. -10-
on some deleted poem 26 Sep 2003, 4:15 PM
Poemranker, like Scrabble, does not allow the use of proper nouns.
on some deleted poem 26 Sep 2003, 4:34 PM
This poem made me really want to have a cigarette.
on Life's Work by baughworm 26 Sep 2003, 4:37 PM
The second verse is quite excellent, but then it got a bit soppy.
on Conform by oldschool 26 Sep 2003, 4:50 PM
I see you have really bucked the system by refusing to use an apostrophe to indicate a contraction. Power to the people!
on bumblebee robot by FreeFormFixation 26 Sep 2003, 4:54 PM
Bees are really excellent.
Mensturate in the shark pool!!! Why didn't I think of that?
on paper boats by sally6479 27 Sep 2003, 5:23 PM
I particularly like the first inversion around lines 5 to 6.
Perhaps it might interest you to know that I have rabies.
Wait, are you saying you actually went to a poetry reading place? What did you expect?
on some deleted poem 28 Sep 2003, 5:37 PM
Do you write poetry for a living?
on religion by ThePariahDog 28 Sep 2003, 5:41 PM
Jesus loves you.
on body image by http://mulberryfairy 29 Sep 2003, 6:04 AM
You should have just drawn an ASCII picture of a naked woman's body.