on turn the cameras off by crin
25 Oct 2003, 5:16 PM
Your life must be a living hell. Thank you for sharing that with us through your poetry. -10-
on The Gone-Too-Far Kitchen by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?
25 Oct 2003, 5:08 PM
Hey, I know I joke around a bit, but I've decided to try and write a serious poem for once. I'm quite pleased with the result. I hope you will enjoy it too.
replying on First Time In A Long Time by EAger to Offend
25 Oct 2003, 4:50 PM
I knew it!!! Even your comments are brimming with uninhibited emotion.
replying on verruca by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?
25 Oct 2003, 4:48 PM
You cannot thwart me with your pseudo-haikus.
replying on verruca by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?
25 Oct 2003, 4:40 PM
RE: "Cherish" doesn't work.e with the "eh" suff-ends of the first two lines.
Sorry, I only accept coherent comments.
Sorry, I only accept coherent comments.
on First Time In A Long Time by EAger to Offend
24 Oct 2003, 2:17 PM
You play the guitar? You must be very creative.
replying on My Time by J.B. Manning
24 Oct 2003, 1:58 PM
My favorite line was "lobe".
on Go On a Business Trip by abecedarian
22 Oct 2003, 3:58 PM
I know how you feel, I am always jet-setting around the globe: Huddersfiled, Slough, Tunbrige Wells... Boy, it never ends.
on My Time by J.B. Manning
22 Oct 2003, 3:56 PM
Hey, I know we've had our disagreements in the past, but I really liked this poem.
on African Killer Bees, it's not the smell of smoke by <{Baba^Yaga}>
22 Oct 2003, 3:55 PM
There seem to be a dispropotionate number of poems about bees on this site. I can't complain, I am guilty of it myself. See "Deceit."
on 3am by Nicholas Jones
22 Oct 2003, 3:53 PM
I once knew a person who used to make rubbish .ST3 files on his computer. One of his "tewns" was called "Bored," and then one night he made a remix of it called "Bored 3am." I don't really know why. Anyway, I though this might be of interest to you.
I assume this is the BBC World Service? Do you live in Botswana or something?
I assume this is the BBC World Service? Do you live in Botswana or something?
on Slayer Sucks by peaceseeker
22 Oct 2003, 3:47 PM
Look, I can see where you're coming from. However, you have to take into account the fact that people can change. If nothing else, Kerry King has sprouted a most venerable beard in the years since the terrible travesties of which you speak, and I think this should be held in his favour. And that is to say nothing of his stately beer-belly.
In some ways I agree; Of course, the members of the orchestral group, Slayer, should never have allowed the young men in question to make unbecoming comments in the vicinity of their roving omnibus. Nonetheless, surely they must still be allowed the rein to express themselves? Are we to ban all art because of this indiscretion? Of course not; freedom to express one's self is paramount in a forward thinking society.
I disparove of the police as well, especially the way they try to prevent crimes. But then that's just one of things you have to try to live with. Life's like that, you know?
In some ways I agree; Of course, the members of the orchestral group, Slayer, should never have allowed the young men in question to make unbecoming comments in the vicinity of their roving omnibus. Nonetheless, surely they must still be allowed the rein to express themselves? Are we to ban all art because of this indiscretion? Of course not; freedom to express one's self is paramount in a forward thinking society.
I disparove of the police as well, especially the way they try to prevent crimes. But then that's just one of things you have to try to live with. Life's like that, you know?
replying on September 11, 2001: That Day by blues361
19 Oct 2003, 3:03 PM
Wow, you are so alternative.
replying on September 11, 2001: That Day by blues361
19 Oct 2003, 9:06 AM
I still have nightmares about that terrible day, even now. David Anderson's cry still haunts me, "Why are you doing this... why? No, not the fencing cupboard, for God's sake, please not the dreaded fencing cupboard. Nooooooooo....." And then I wake up screaming and clawing at my bloodied face, the sheets drenched in my own sweat and urine.
on September 11, 2001: That Day by blues361
18 Oct 2003, 6:29 PM
I suppose you have a right to talk about these terrible events. However, they stir up horrible memories in me that I would rather forget.
on Metaphysical Poets by Bachus
18 Oct 2003, 6:26 PM
Having read this poem, I have resolved to stop writing poetry merely for its commercial value, and also to desist in my skag habit.
replying on Sonnet or Limerick? by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?
18 Oct 2003, 6:16 PM
When I am (inevitably one day) a billionaire, I WILL have a jelly bath installed in my car. However, don't pretend you are from the New World with words such as "jello," I saw you use the word "quid" in some comment or other.
replying on Sonnet or Limerick? by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?
18 Oct 2003, 6:13 PM
You are a complete sonnet Witney.
replying on Facial Bliss by ARTIE
18 Oct 2003, 6:08 PM
You are thinking of a different Mr Kipling.