on some deleted poem
1 Jul 2003, 8:14 PM
Shit, I can't log out, BASTARDS! Don't make me take the bus hostage and make a movie called "Speeing"
on Blind Walk Into Poem Ranker by DreamerSupreme
1 Jul 2003, 3:19 PM
Charming.
on Globetrotter by bondjedi
1 Jul 2003, 2:21 PM
lol
on Belongings by Christof
23 Jun 2003, 12:00 AM
Absolutely poetry at it's best
on some deleted poem
1 Jul 2003, 6:48 PM
"..[].."
Never, I brought a space ship named Homer with an eloctronical vulva that can make meringue for lemons.
Never, I brought a space ship named Homer with an eloctronical vulva that can make meringue for lemons.
on Introduction by Decree... by Wulf
1 Jul 2003, 7:06 PM
Superb up until the last five lines then it goes a bit soft.
on flaming breasts by Freethinker1602
1 Jul 2003, 10:57 PM
As agnostic as a bag of flaming puppy coca.
on some deleted poem
1 Jul 2003, 2:12 PM
That's too bad, since his poetry clearly outclasses the majority of shit on this sight hands down. Tsk.
on some deleted poem
1 Jul 2003, 3:44 PM
Why? So I could call it "Backhand" and slap the shit out of you again? Please, See, I know when too not waste my time any longer on a tired subject. It's too easy John.
on speed weed by Freethinker1602
28 Jun 2003, 9:28 AM
okay, and then?
on Creating A Bitch by Kitch
28 Jun 2003, 9:02 PM
"and did do convincingly" please don't be a booger eater on my shift. Remove the 'do' for christ sake. And never use a mediocre movie for the last line of a poem, ever. And being a Bitch is inherited actually, normally from a feminine role model in close constant vicinity during the rearing of the said CHILD.
on Ack Bassward, or something like that by thepinkbunnyofdoom
28 Jun 2003, 9:09 PM
Dude, you need to go out on the town or to the lake with someone that knows what in the fuck they are doing, because this is reaching everywhere and getting no where. can I edit it for you? Good god I split my pants just about roaring at your observations, not that they are shite, just put to structure with a style and mood that's boring and to riskless. Let me edit this and teach you my style for handling this kind of predicament. Deal?
on some deleted poem
24 Jun 2003, 2:58 PM
A shit yogurt with shit sprinkles. what you've done here is taken an okay movie plot and try to tell it back to us (as if were that stupid to have not watched a Pacino flick?) using the same fucking title of the movie from the perspective 'this time' of your sad stupid tiny uninformed brain. Gooooood, super, next
on some deleted poem
24 Jun 2003, 3:13 PM
Hi, I'm a poet, my names Foreskinner, i also play bass in the speed metal band called "I ate careal out of my dead mother's vulva" we have a show this weekend at the Sizzler in Chino, Ca. Come check it out. We're giving away our new cd called the "Shitngdom of Shitvil' and dude, it's the shit.
on Operation Candy Apple Tango by thepinkbunnyofdoom
23 Jun 2003, 8:48 PM
Precisely why I'm bisexual. A summer and winter home.
If I could offer you some advice it would be take more risks, and find and mix layerably more stimulating subjects and materials. For example, put tis poem inside of a diner with al of the weird characters that would accompany the diner of your imagination, 100 year old waitress with a tit job. gay tough guy rapist trucker, and so on. think U turn (the movie) then mix in this subtextualesque story of a chick that ignores you piece. capeesh.
If I could offer you some advice it would be take more risks, and find and mix layerably more stimulating subjects and materials. For example, put tis poem inside of a diner with al of the weird characters that would accompany the diner of your imagination, 100 year old waitress with a tit job. gay tough guy rapist trucker, and so on. think U turn (the movie) then mix in this subtextualesque story of a chick that ignores you piece. capeesh.
on some deleted poem
23 Jun 2003, 12:34 AM
That's supreme dreamimg. I fell asleep three times and I just injected amphetamines. I could squash this into a haiku, and say more for your observations, notice.
A supreme dream w/extra sourcream and a diet tab
An Haiku by Errr Ah, Well-when-it-comes-to-me-I'll get-back-with-you. I know it's a mouthfull but hey, that's Hawaians for you.
Thanks mom & dad, but
How long is this going to take?
If you love me leave.
A supreme dream w/extra sourcream and a diet tab
An Haiku by Errr Ah, Well-when-it-comes-to-me-I'll get-back-with-you. I know it's a mouthfull but hey, that's Hawaians for you.
Thanks mom & dad, but
How long is this going to take?
If you love me leave.
on some deleted poem
23 Jun 2003, 12:04 AM
Hi John
on some deleted poem
1 Jul 2003, 6:57 PM
muahah
on I'll be your Gimp by GAY AS FU*K
1 Jul 2003, 3:10 PM
priceless