on some deleted poem
13 Mar 2003, 11:04 AM
the last stanzas off by one.
on Keanu Vs The mystery of life by Shardik
7 Mar 2003, 3:04 PM
I said you were a good poet. Don't confuse that with you actually knowing what in the fuck you are talking about. You aren't that good friend by a long shot. Sorry, but fact.
on Third Period English by Sawa
18 Mar 2003, 1:00 AM
Great.
on some deleted poem
15 Mar 2003, 7:48 PM
This would be great asshole if you weren't using my name.
on The Sons and Daughters of the New Light by Bonehiss
18 Mar 2003, 12:38 AM
By the way... You can thank me later for turning you onto Manly P. Hall. You need it, but i will commend you on your effort with an eight, but just know you are over complicating things dramaticaly here. 8.
on Meditation 03 by Blue Magpie
16 Mar 2003, 3:50 PM
God's test? lol. better bring a number two pencil. People think the strangest things i swears. God's test? ah... i take it that it's... multiple choice with an essay at the end for enlightenment? does he or she offer re-testing for those of us hungover or cripples that missed the bus? what about children under the age of ten that die naturally do they get a chance to understand your's and god's testing methods? What a crock of shit.
on some deleted poem
15 Mar 2003, 7:43 PM
How much should i pay you a month to continue the legend that is me?
on some deleted poem
15 Mar 2003, 7:57 PM
Since you've been writing under my birth name settle, you've sold me an extra 100 to 200 dollars a month! That's almost a thousand dollars Me, Nadine and micah just wan't to say thank you, for the brilliant advertisizingt technique (not quite Saul Bass but close). It's beeter than Fellini's 8 & a half (by the way my mentor designed that movie's poster! not that you need a j-o-b, [he's dependant on mom's cut, of course]). Amazing really. Where should i send your cut? Also, my web site gets like an extra 200 hits! it is amazing. you are a genius!
on hard as a rock by <~>
13 Mar 2003, 3:38 PM
i'm giving it a nine, even if it's to him.
on Orders to My Zombie Legions by razorgrin
13 Mar 2003, 4:02 PM
Yes! Friend o' the Devil is a friend of mine. If i gert home before daylight i just might get some sleep tonight hight... Got a wife in Chino... 9.
on The Bloody War Of Angels by Caducus
13 Mar 2003, 12:00 PM
My real father was a dark angel, an incubi. That's why i'm supermany and have perfect nails and hairs.
on The Courtesan by horus8
13 Mar 2003, 12:02 PM
whore.
on Unholy War by marvelis
5 Mar 2003, 6:00 PM
The American word used to be one million dead indians, ten million dead buffalo, but now it's just Steve Martin and Queen Latiffa which just peeves me off. How about you?
on some deleted poem
5 Mar 2003, 6:05 PM
(in a high italian tenor) I sing a sonnet to mildred, i sing a sonnet to phil, a hole in posterior grayness. just as long as they'll give me more pills.
on i will not come to bangladesh by lost in america
7 Mar 2003, 3:06 PM
One problem here. I don't like you or your poem any more. Stuffy dot head shit.
on hehehe by Freethinker1602
7 Mar 2003, 2:51 PM
Are you stupid? Do you hug serial killers too? Perhaps you should take a long look at the ying~yang symbol. THere is no good without something opposite for it to argue it's case to. This has to be the most ironically pointless poem on the planet. Congradulations.
on Enantiodromia by Bonehiss
18 Mar 2003, 12:39 AM
this is impeccable though.
SWAGGER AWARDE! 10!
SWAGGER AWARDE! 10!
on i will not come to bangladesh by lost in america
7 Mar 2003, 3:09 PM
I tried to be nice but you let it go to your head. On further review. You fail! It moves like a snake, but it tastes like chicken. I should send horus over, but that would really make you look bad so. see you later. Dickk