on i miss you by bxjay170
11 Nov 2002, 1:25 PM
the word "holping" does seem to offer a bit of hope so can you holp me holp you holp yourself. you're fired. next.A
on some deleted poem
17 Nov 2002, 9:27 PM
thought you'd never ask. saw you in harry potter yesterday. good show ol'chap. take a six and feed it to your parakeet.
on Jockey by betty swallox
11 Nov 2002, 11:03 AM
fine.
on MY dear friend by jonny2000
17 Nov 2002, 9:24 PM
what? you think that since you put "from my mom" at the bottom it would bring relivence? you were sadly wrong. freak. 4.
on some deleted poem
17 Nov 2002, 9:35 PM
you brother are a star. this is the funniest thing i've read in a spell. nOW BACK IN THE BOX WITH YOU! 10!
on some deleted poem
17 Nov 2002, 9:15 PM
do me a favor. give in.3.
on some deleted poem
17 Nov 2002, 9:18 PM
no wait...that's not silence...THAT'S A WALL OF RAW SEWAGE! DUCK! 2.
on The Wooden Armchair Of Similar Dreams by Caducus
15 Nov 2002, 12:01 AM
i'm going to give you a nine on this...be proud..i normally tear the fuck out of everybody just out of sheer distemperment. why? hardcore denial my friend, and alot lot more...this made me care about life again on certain levels, and i choose to cover the girls name at the bottom, replace it with mine, and pretend it was a note to me from someone who held me along time ago....but no more is that...no more...is me. 9. boo-hoo. col! lol! col!dol!bol!wol!
on Chicago Detroit by w~* ATHENA *~w
14 Nov 2002, 12:20 AM
the more to follows... fucks it up...up until that. genius. 9.
on i miss you by bxjay170
11 Nov 2002, 1:21 PM
wtching yo prposely mispll thangs becouse you'ree bored. bores me, and frankly...you should be keel hauled and sent to collect oysters for shillings.i've felt pigeon feed with more texture than this train wreck. have fun on the worst list it's inevitable.
on some deleted poem
11 Nov 2002, 2:25 PM
ha.!crikey! that's a toss. have an eight. for the title and conclusion.???
great last line, but second stanza last line "horizon" and or hori-zen which could be better, but since you don't have any other hyphens going on any where else it wouldn't look that good i guess...interesting notion though...just forget everything i said..i'm stoned and squandering my time unwisely again...has anyone seen a better manager or agent floating around here..i need a new one. bad.
on Goodbye by Nicholas Jones
11 Nov 2002, 3:45 PM
and the brethren say satasfactory. i don't care for you as a human being, because your not yet, but i will buy you a beer after work one day..so here. i enjoyed reading it on all the levels that count in the attic across the street from you...here i'll flash my light twice to proof it.2
on The silent moon by UAFANTHORPEY
11 Nov 2002, 11:16 AM
once the moon made me travel drunk in the wrong direction...i ran out of gas..kicked out both of my headlights..ripped my steering wheel and hood off.then bawled like a baby and blamed my parents for all of it still holding onto my steering wheel as a teddy bear for hours. fucking moon.
on Sprinklers by KarmicTwiggy
13 Nov 2002, 11:30 PM
going to carolina in my mind. forever. 8.