replying on Walk in a dream (an ode to self help poems) by Bachus
26 Jul 2003, 8:24 PM
Written horribly purposely.
replying on Kakistocracy by <{Baba^Yaga}>
26 Jul 2003, 8:14 PM
I feel it's close, but could be arranged somehow better or strengthened too. We shall see on a later edit no doubt. Thanks kindly in the meantime.
on Poemranker's Recent Infestation of Teenage Girls by 68.75.19.117
26 Jul 2003, 6:36 PM
Can I make requests, and be like a 'ranger' and haul lil bastards in?
on Escape is an Unaffordable luxury by Freethinker1602
26 Jul 2003, 5:12 PM
"Escape is an Unafordable luxury" And apparently literacy.
on Strength by Freethinker1602
26 Jul 2003, 5:11 PM
"When your life seems to crunble down around you" It's like you reached in and took the words right out of my mouth? Amazing. Bravo.
on Strength by Freethinker1602
26 Jul 2003, 5:06 PM
And here we clearly see the benifits of raising your child in a good catholic school early on.
on The Bearded Men by walrus8
26 Jul 2003, 4:46 PM
213.122.69.233
on The Path Untrodden by Terence
26 Jul 2003, 4:35 PM
mmmm. Indeed.
replying on You are a divider by Bachus
26 Jul 2003, 4:28 PM
How about one you don't call your own? Rape me with a friends.
replying on Taurus women and the pride by Shardik
25 Jul 2003, 3:32 PM
Women born under the bull constellation.
replying on You are a divider by Bachus
25 Jul 2003, 3:29 PM
I love you.
replying on You are a divider by Bachus
25 Jul 2003, 3:29 PM
I love you.
on Feasting Ouroboros by <~>
23 Jul 2003, 3:44 PM
I never have went anywhere, for myself. And soon, since I've been getting offers to be the next Michael Hutchinson, I believe it'll get worse than better.
But for the poem and the moment I will sell it all.
And wake up dead in a hotel.
But for the poem and the moment I will sell it all.
And wake up dead in a hotel.
replying on Lake Pyramid's Secret by Bachus
23 Jul 2003, 3:38 PM
Help me imagine that. Can you clarify? I like auditions, they keep me wary of just how low it all goes, but occasionally it pays off.
on Voluptuous, Blonde Bird-Woman by http://mulberryfairy
23 Jul 2003, 2:44 PM
Hilarious.
on Her Sleeping Form by JoyLuck
23 Jul 2003, 12:34 PM
I hope you made a sandwich when you were done.
replying on Can you believe this piece of shit was #1? by horus8
23 Jul 2003, 12:29 AM
to the max.
orange in the fall
white in the winter
And Spring reddens them all.