on Paean by Terence
17 Jul 2003, 9:41 AM
Fortune cookie poetry is better not removed from the cookie and consumed. When your spirit soars, do you steer it like a kite? When you praise the lord, do you give god the glory, glory? I believe the world is your scallop and she is a barnacle.
replying on Las Gaviotas by Bachus
16 Jul 2003, 3:56 PM
Yeah, I guess.
on Optimism, pessimism and my quarter theory by INTRANSIT
15 Jul 2003, 5:13 PM
Don't do it man! LOL.
I loved the first three quarters of it.
I loved the first three quarters of it.
on Igor's inspiration by zzinnia66
15 Jul 2003, 5:09 PM
Quite the looking glass.
on Broken by OnTheOtherHand
11 Jul 2003, 2:43 PM
lol.
on How To Make Up Without Saying I'm Sorry by OnTheOtherHand
11 Jul 2003, 2:41 PM
Please get out of my window display. If you think I'm too fucking gay. lol
replying on Nigger Hole by horus8
10 Jul 2003, 7:15 PM
Ah, I probably wouldn't use this on my poetic resume per say, but it's good propaganda. Yeah, I know the feelin'. Anyhow, whenever you feel like talking or want me to help you edit a piece... just let me know, it doesn't have to be Satanic, I was just practicing swinging around my new tail is all.
replying on Walk in a dream (an ode to self help poems) by Bachus
9 Jul 2003, 4:26 PM
Yes, indeed.
on love sick by rymemaster
8 Jul 2003, 1:04 PM
"Now your left alone" you are or you're. If you're going to attempt being wicked and aloof? Please do it correctly, otherwise you give us poets of darkness a bad name.
on Everyone thinks I'm Settle by King Abdullah II
8 Jul 2003, 1:01 PM
Yes!
on the godself within by crwncka1
7 Jul 2003, 2:40 PM
You are trying to hard, you need to let go, because this poetry of yours today is just shit mate, turn around and do it again, I'm serious. It's not poetry, it sounds like the diluted message of a dyslexic cult leader huffing on low grade gasoline.
on the power that be by crwncka1
7 Jul 2003, 2:20 PM
That's not the universe ticking gumshoe that's the sound of poets everywhere eating their time pieces, so as to forget when they read this.
replying on 2838 Denise Dr. Troy, Mi. by Bachus
6 Jul 2003, 2:47 PM
Ah, yo're quick today.
replying on 2838 Denise Dr. Troy, Mi. by Bachus
6 Jul 2003, 2:46 PM
The squirrel died my friend, the dog was on it's carcass chewing. Revenge for hours of torment. Read between the lines. The dog can't be on something if it's dead, now can it?
replying on Independence Day (the speech from the film) by scitz
6 Jul 2003, 12:47 PM
The irony, obviously. We are the locusts capable of moving from planet to planet doing just what it is we supposedly are resisting. That and timing, because it's unquotable hollywood crap being used by a poet to repoint the finger, I believe, makes the piece entirely different from the way you're viewing it. It made me laugh at every line.
on Independence Day (the speech from the film) by scitz
6 Jul 2003, 12:43 PM
I sense some internal personalization occuring. lol.
on Rude Awakenings by OneFingerAnswer
5 Jul 2003, 11:19 PM
One of your best.