poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Bachus (41-60) and replies

Comments byBachus, 41–60 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on The Room by darylchew 30 Aug 2004, 11:25 AM
Jesus
on Out goes the baby with the garbage by INTRANSIT 30 Aug 2004, 11:08 AM
Far out.
on He by BigB 30 Aug 2004, 11:02 AM
"But you never did came"? Good one, very Arkansass.
replying on Haunted by Bachus 30 Aug 2004, 10:53 AM
Is that code for RUN!!!...?
replying on Haunted by Bachus 30 Aug 2004, 10:52 AM
The house is a metaphor for a person...
you know, getting older, overgrown? like a house would.
You've never seen an old overgrown yard with a house somewhere in it?
on Mephistophelian Seductress by SupremeDreamer 29 Aug 2004, 2:31 AM
Sounds like a threnody.
on The Downfall of a Pagan Man by somemorepoetry 18 Aug 2004, 6:53 AM
Epic
on Guess the place! by Patsy 17 Aug 2004, 11:31 PM
Is it Uranus?
on Surfer by INTRANSIT 17 Aug 2004, 11:23 PM
Ripped
on MY HEART REMEMBERS by massangel62 30 Jul 2004, 1:56 PM
I came to read this because I thought your name was 'massangil' like the douche.
on The recovery room by katinchina 29 Jul 2004, 10:18 PM
The Kitchen ( A Free curse) By Capt. Napkin

Fat eyes pleading
Plump hands reaching out
Obese gravy stuffed dumplings
Lifeless
Pugeot smells of life drinking spirits
Plummish smells of deaf defeated pots and pans
Old crapes on sheets, old flour on him
Nectarine hair, bloating rumps
"The illusion of health and food full bellies"?
A cornucopia of...Corn...
Starving for pop
Still clinging to aluminum, clamoring for salt
"The smell of death I met miles outside"?
Inside, the Kitchen gleamed with new dishes to break my momma tongue against like a wounded
seal on the dingy of infidelity, and a filthy
floor.
replying on Las Gaviotas by Bachus 29 Jul 2004, 10:02 PM
A canteen of plump
That was a skid mark, really, did the world lie to you son? Pull up your britches, and learn to lie better.
on Fragile by QuirkyWonder 29 Jul 2004, 9:52 PM
oh dear that was like squashed emo droppings, totally gross, you fucking SUCK!
on I Dream..... by frdup717 29 Jul 2004, 9:47 PM
Death by vagina.
on Mors Omnia Solvit by shit 29 Jul 2004, 9:46 PM
Christ, that was bleak... What the fuck is wrong with you? Pickled?
on Heart Cancer by shit 23 Jul 2004, 12:51 AM
This is a parody just begging to dance on your face.
on Flying things by INTRANSIT 23 Jul 2004, 12:49 AM
you're high, weaponry... lol, you should see me PEE IN the snow.
on Summer by Dovina 23 Jul 2004, 12:46 AM
Last line would do better to rhyme as the first stanza did.
on Wholes: the year in reflection by impert&ent 23 Jul 2004, 12:45 AM
Gnarly