on My Dark Power by The Martyr
10 May 2003, 11:36 AM
That makes the two of us.
replying on The boy who shot birds by Bachus
10 May 2003, 11:33 AM
I don't think three of your poems are shit. I believe all of them to be shit. Whether you are twelve or 32 or ten, 6, 600. It's irrelevant, because, you can't spell, your poetry is pointlessly self absorbed and ridiculous, your grammar is shite! And beyond all of that you have no grasp of poetry, art, or what it is you're trying to spit out of that void between your ears called the human mind. Congradulations, I hope you can skate for a day job?
on The Martyr (Without A Cause) by The Martyr
9 May 2003, 7:53 PM
For Palestine West Virginia's favoutite vagina Laci Peterson.
replying on blockbuster by bondjedi
9 May 2003, 3:14 PM
You do.
replying on Birth in the Valley of Liquor by horus8
9 May 2003, 3:10 PM
http://gangbox.com/mp3/Birth%20in%20the%20valley%20of.mp3
Here's a better comment for you to skate board too.
I would of taken the time to read your comment if it wasn't completely assanine and reeking of contempt and chirpes.
Here's a better comment for you to skate board too.
I would of taken the time to read your comment if it wasn't completely assanine and reeking of contempt and chirpes.
replying on Black Buns by Bachus
9 May 2003, 2:58 PM
I didn't ask. And I haven't a clue, or do I give a shit as to what in the fuck you are yammering about! how about you read the 39 comments above yours and chirp to those people, thanks! Art and poetry are two different things entirely by the way (unless you are writing concrete poems or da-da). Good luck on your search!
on Cabin by the lake by psikosis
9 May 2003, 12:18 PM
Friday the thirteenth part whatever.
on My final poem by lee's tommy
9 May 2003, 12:05 PM
Shit.
on Trichomanic Sexless Bitch by superskunky1
9 May 2003, 11:58 AM
On a serious level the poem is almost grate! Grateful for rathering to die of course. the last line and title take away from it.
replying on An enchillada called revenge! by horus8
1 May 2003, 10:52 PM
And the my fingers? Are a big time 'a one bigtime longy chicky jew wongy' trust in that if say the cereal box goes a tilt gone.
replying on An enchillada called revenge! by horus8
1 May 2003, 10:50 PM
I change every day and every way.
I have the my fingers around the neck of infinity.
I have the my fingers around the neck of infinity.
on moments lost in adversity by brazen
29 Apr 2003, 12:41 AM
You make me feel guilty, and I wash my hands a lot?
on Yay for Unspeakable Evil! by razorgrin
29 Apr 2003, 12:38 AM
Necronomicon
Death, madness and Cthulu.
Let's swallow some souls.
Death, madness and Cthulu.
Let's swallow some souls.
on Yay for Unspeakable Evil! by razorgrin
29 Apr 2003, 12:34 AM
"On this day, I have found fear..." Ahbdul Alhazar 'the mad arab'. (from the Necronomicon)
on Yay for Unspeakable Evil! by razorgrin
29 Apr 2003, 12:31 AM
HA HA HA HA HA HA!!!!!!!! what? You're kidding right? lol. I'll bring the greater and lesser key of Solomon just in case.
on 3am and six cups of coffee gets you nowhere by Blindproject217
26 Apr 2003, 8:30 PM
sepulchral, or sepulcher, but not what you have, because it's not a word. Other then that, there are about ten grammaric goof ups and a couple other typos, but it's the thought that counts.