replying on OUtSiDEr by debased
25 Nov 2002, 7:18 PM
no. just her amusing side. 1/2.
on Irony by w~* ATHENA *~w
25 Nov 2002, 5:48 PM
"die-anetics" but volcanoes and lava are so symbolic. point. show them how you control the volcanic side of yourself and they'll buy your book, or die trying..have an eight cuz i haven't.
on Maria's ways on how to deal with puberty! by little_angel_maria
25 Nov 2002, 5:19 PM
if you're left handed..why write with your right?.the problem with puberty? pre-sense of humor, and in all honesty teens go to the movies to finger bang third cousins and lower class man and then let their friends digit smell. in other words farting is not aloud stinky.
replying on Maria's ways on how to deal with puberty! by little_angel_maria
25 Nov 2002, 5:19 PM
hysterical. bravo. what a fine indescent observation.
on The North Wind by Ranger
25 Nov 2002, 12:53 PM
i've just seen all your cards.
replying on The Smurf Village by Bachus
25 Nov 2002, 12:38 PM
just what i've always wanted. a helmet with a visor. thanks freddy!
on Metaphysical Haiku by Idaho
22 Nov 2002, 12:30 PM
this is exemplirary work to the tenth degree. 10.h
on Parking Lot by uncannydanny
21 Nov 2002, 10:35 PM
the material involved in this piece is definitely savory, but the ??? shit has to go danny..if you fix it i'll give you an eight just for the false teeth and wig jettison.
on the devil in you by ciantu
21 Nov 2002, 10:24 PM
Bastard is spelled this way BASS-TURD! and i prefer to be called James. thanks.
she's a taurus, they can only go ignored for a short period of time before they wipe the board...honestly though i don't know why she did that? as far as loss goes it all still was saved in our personal comment areas..right? so. anyway, i'm fond of dark angel i wouldn't want to ah mock our beautifull relationship in any sense...i don't think it was his fault though, she's just like that...always has been too...always either night or day...know what i mean?.
on Just Die Already... by loneshadow29
21 Nov 2002, 12:33 PM
you first. you know how i feel about you, but i'm going to be a big boy for a minute a rate this with no bye-ass 0. lol! naw just kidding here's an eight...because the titles cool and it's all around well done like my eggs benidect and fresh squeezed orange juice..you know it's 85 degrees right now in sunny california..slice of papaya? anyone? 8. mayne add a question mark with an exlamation POINT! for overall stamina down the stretch aye.r
on Night-mare by INTRANSIT
20 Nov 2002, 8:04 PM
i once stole a mannequin.
replying on Papa Smurf by Bachus
20 Nov 2002, 6:21 PM
you really don't care very much for smurfs do you. shame really. you must be very old. and bitter.e
on Orange Hills (Villanelle) by Moss
20 Nov 2002, 12:16 PM
i watched my gradfather die of parkinson's disease, and it was funnier than any sitcom on the air at the time..what is time? something that obviously scares the shit out of you...now we're even, because the thought of you teaching old people creative writing when you can barely grasp that notion let alone the meaning.. scares the piss out of me, but just for a second. nice orange hill.
on Now I Know by BUFFY0BSESSED
20 Nov 2002, 10:28 AM
i hate you. and your fat and ugly. enjoy your stay...we serve danishes at noon.