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27-Apr-04/8:11 AM |
I imagined a very large, crevicy woman with lots of surface area and all that stretching and sliding.
And I have trouble believing the door actually creaked.
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| Re: Herman by richa |
27-Apr-04/8:16 AM |
A way of saying he has no ambition?
I'm still noodling the runes and figures. Thinking stockmarket, but that goes against the ambition thing.
Lost his ambition?
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| Re: Of Gods & Beast In Villanelle by Bachus |
27-Apr-04/8:21 AM |
thematically consistent.
too bad it only has two rhymes (okay, that was a joke for blindpoe's benefit)
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27-Apr-04/8:33 AM |
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might be more with less KA - still, picturesque.
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27-Apr-04/8:35 AM |
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27-Apr-04/6:51 PM |
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I don't know if I was supposed to. But I got a nice chuckle out of the thing.
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| Re: exist by the indign |
27-Apr-04/6:55 PM |
This would be a nice piece with the self-pity dialed back maybe one notch.
Quite a bit of good in it.
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| Re: Brush me away by nothingtoanyone |
27-Apr-04/6:58 PM |
"last piece of my" - what?
again in l3 - this is on purpose, right? Why?
oh - I see you've been informed already.
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| Re: Suicide over the course of a lifetime by GregDeEgg |
27-Apr-04/7:09 PM |
yep. U is crA-Z
There should be a separate category for this kinda stuff.
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| Re: exist by the indign |
27-Apr-04/7:22 PM |
just so you know I looked it up:
in·dign - adj.
Archaic. Unworthy.
Obsolete. Shameful; disgraceful.
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| Re: Pardon my lines by Bobjim |
28-Apr-04/5:29 AM |
what is an example, please, of a stolen transport tool?
I liked it.
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| Re: start here by jsd |
28-Apr-04/5:50 AM |
Too funny, I was going to mention that the thing reeked of a pink floyd lyric - and that started from the line:
"I got ancient blood on my hands,"
then I noticed the disclaimer at the end.
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30-Apr-04/4:13 AM |
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(nobody in particular, so chill)
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| Re: The Conqueror Worm by zodiac |
30-Apr-04/11:44 AM |
Simply the best thing you've ever fucking done.
Brilliant. Absolutely Memorable. I'll take it to my grave and I am grateful that I have seen it before I go there.
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| Re: vigilante park -- by Ross Robbins by achingwish |
30-Apr-04/9:58 PM |
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2-May-04/7:29 PM |
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Stanza four is quite lovely.
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| Re: Call of the Marine by ggawrysi |
2-May-04/7:31 PM |
Not loving the brain/slain rhyme.
The acrostic"ness" is extremely smooth however, so ju get a tenspot from me.
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2-May-04/7:32 PM |
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2-May-04/7:33 PM |
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| Re: the beale street mud festival. by wilco |
2-May-04/7:35 PM |
"only sound" really is tough to pull off...
Some nice images here.
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