on some deleted poem
2 May 2004, 7:32 PM
Nice one.
on some deleted poem
2 May 2004, 7:33 PM
Cute.
on some deleted poem
27 Apr 2004, 8:11 AM
I imagined a very large, crevicy woman with lots of surface area and all that stretching and sliding.
And I have trouble believing the door actually creaked.
And I have trouble believing the door actually creaked.
on Of Gods & Beast In Villanelle by Bachus
27 Apr 2004, 8:21 AM
thematically consistent.
too bad it only has two rhymes (okay, that was a joke for blindpoe's benefit)
too bad it only has two rhymes (okay, that was a joke for blindpoe's benefit)
on some deleted poem
27 Apr 2004, 8:33 AM
might be more with less KA - still, picturesque.
on some deleted poem
27 Apr 2004, 8:35 AM
so many contradictions.
on some deleted poem
27 Apr 2004, 6:51 PM
I don't know if I was supposed to. But I got a nice chuckle out of the thing.
on exist by the indign
27 Apr 2004, 6:55 PM
This would be a nice piece with the self-pity dialed back maybe one notch.
Quite a bit of good in it.
Quite a bit of good in it.
on Brush me away by nothingtoanyone
27 Apr 2004, 6:58 PM
"last piece of my" - what?
again in l3 - this is on purpose, right? Why?
oh - I see you've been informed already.
again in l3 - this is on purpose, right? Why?
oh - I see you've been informed already.
on Suicide over the course of a lifetime by GregDeEgg
27 Apr 2004, 7:09 PM
yep. U is crA-Z
There should be a separate category for this kinda stuff.
There should be a separate category for this kinda stuff.
on exist by the indign
27 Apr 2004, 7:22 PM
just so you know I looked it up:
in·dign - adj.
Archaic. Unworthy.
Obsolete. Shameful; disgraceful.
in·dign - adj.
Archaic. Unworthy.
Obsolete. Shameful; disgraceful.
on Pardon my lines by Bobjim
28 Apr 2004, 5:29 AM
what is an example, please, of a stolen transport tool?
I liked it.
I liked it.
on start here by jsd
28 Apr 2004, 5:50 AM
Too funny, I was going to mention that the thing reeked of a pink floyd lyric - and that started from the line:
"I got ancient blood on my hands,"
then I noticed the disclaimer at the end.
"I got ancient blood on my hands,"
then I noticed the disclaimer at the end.
on some deleted poem
30 Apr 2004, 4:13 AM
(nobody in particular, so chill)
on The Conqueror Worm by zodiac
30 Apr 2004, 11:44 AM
Simply the best thing you've ever fucking done.
Brilliant. Absolutely Memorable. I'll take it to my grave and I am grateful that I have seen it before I go there.
Brilliant. Absolutely Memorable. I'll take it to my grave and I am grateful that I have seen it before I go there.
on vigilante park -- by Ross Robbins by achingwish
30 Apr 2004, 9:58 PM
lovely
on the beale street mud festival. by wilco
2 May 2004, 7:35 PM
"only sound" really is tough to pull off...
Some nice images here.
Some nice images here.
on some deleted poem
2 May 2004, 7:29 PM
Stanza four is quite lovely.
on Call of the Marine by ggawrysi
2 May 2004, 7:31 PM
Not loving the brain/slain rhyme.
The acrostic"ness" is extremely smooth however, so ju get a tenspot from me.
The acrostic"ness" is extremely smooth however, so ju get a tenspot from me.