poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Wobble McFly and replies

Comments byWobble McFly, the 20 most recent, including replies. Only comments on poems

on intent to refrain by skaskowski 5 Nov 2003, 5:49 AM
This poem sounds really good when you persuade a slightly deaf disabled old man, port-sodden like so many of his ancient tribe, to recite it directly into your ear canal using a method of recitation known as "shouting".
on On Visiting My Father by sliver 5 Nov 2003, 5:48 AM
Poemeranker has been flooded with a deluge of "dad" and "dead dad" poems in recent days.

I refer you to the hugely poignant poem "Fathers" by amielou82:

http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=73528

Full marks for keeping to this socially important theme!

-10-
on Through DUSK till DAWN by ShaNoN+960317485 5 Nov 2003, 5:44 AM
Dare should i call it a poem - nay. Its my tribute for all the wonders of this world that i have never seen nor felt in person, but came to love & cherish through the books i hath read in my childhood; as they were my only link to understand the plant & beauty lacking in Maldives. Thank you GOD & friends for allowing me to remember the names so i can write this, MY DREAM & my evolution to love the beauty in the folds of the night.
on Fathers by amielou82 5 Nov 2003, 5:43 AM
Please tell me which of the following names you apply to your father:

(a) Father
(b) Dad
(c) Pops
(d) Pater
(e) Fuck face
(f) All of the above
(g) None of the above

Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!????????!?!?!111
on Saint Peggy Seeger by Retaliate 5 Nov 2003, 5:41 AM
Our Lady of Fiery Rhetoric!
Guide us in this time of trouble!

Let us sing
The Song of Choice

Our Lady of Burning Righteousness!

Joan of Arc incarnate,
Patron Saint of Passion,
Light the way with your fury!
replying on Belgium and rose tears by SupremeDreamer 30 Oct 2003, 4:16 AM
Wow. Incidentally, sausage kiev is available in Natalie's Marriage Agency gift shop, along with a wine called "Bastardo", a wine called "Last Supper", a chocolate squirrel, and a pie made from "crepitating globules". It's all true:

http://ma-natalie.com/gifts.html
replying on The Box by EouSou 30 Oct 2003, 1:44 AM
Woke up this mornin'
Closed in on both sides
Nothin' doin'
I feel resistance
As I open my eyes
Someone's foolin'

I found a way to break through this cellophane bag
Cuz I know what's goin' on
In your mind

I'm a livin' in a box
I'm a livin' in a cardboard box
I'm a livin' in a box
I'm a livin' in a cardboard box
I'm a livin' in a box

Life goes in circles
Around and around
Circulating
I sometimes wonder
What's movin' underground
I'm escaping

I found a way to break through this cellophane bag
Cuz I know what's goin' on
In my mind

I'm a livin' in a box
I'm a livin' in a cardboard box
I'm a livin' in a box
I'm a livin' in a cardboard box
I'm a livin' in a box

(guitar solo)

Livin'
Ahh ha

I found a way to break through this cellophane bag
Cuz I know what's goin' on
In your mind

I'm a livin' in a box
I'm a livin' in a cardboard box
I'm a livin' in a box
I'm a livin' in a cardboard box
I'm a livin' in a box
I'm a livin' in a cardboard box
I'm a livin' in a box
I'm a livin' in a cardboard box
I'm a livin' in a box
I'm a livin' in a cardboard box
I'm a livin' in a box
I'm a livin' in a cardboard box

I'm a livin' I'm a livin'....I'm a livin'
I'm a livin', I'm a livin'....I'm a livin'
I'm a livin' in a box

I'm a livin' in a box....
on Love by EouSou 30 Oct 2003, 1:40 AM
Making love to a child
Starts out by just a kiss

I'm not sure I approve of your pederastic activities, sir!!!!!!
on Megan by RaVensEternalFire 30 Oct 2003, 1:39 AM
Change the last word from "soul" to "ass". -10-
on Fading Freindships by BuffysBack419 30 Oct 2003, 1:38 AM
Stunning. This piece works really well when recited in a heavy Indian accent. -10-
replying on The Santa Anna's fire and red sun by Bachus 30 Oct 2003, 1:35 AM
LOLTTM!!!!!!!????????!!!!!!!!!!?>>>>>>>>>??????!?!???!!!!1111111
on Who I am by Butterfly1120 30 Oct 2003, 1:33 AM
OMG LOL ASL!??!??!??!!!
on Where did you go? by Butterfly1120 30 Oct 2003, 1:29 AM
Had you been "deflowered" yet?
on Angel by Butterfly1120 30 Oct 2003, 1:27 AM
Change the last line to this:

"God sent me an angel, I just call her Motherfucker"

Such an amendment would serve to lend the poem one more layer of polytextual poignality.
on The meaning of Love by The Slender Blade 30 Oct 2003, 1:25 AM
"I can accept closure,
But not indecent exposure."

These two lines are sheer genius. The rest is cack.
on Tipspit by kingit 30 Oct 2003, 1:22 AM
This poem sounds really good when you persuade a slightly deaf disabled old man, port-sodden like so many of his ancient tribe, to recite it directly into your ear canal using a method of recitation known as "shouting".
replying on Belgium and rose tears by SupremeDreamer 30 Oct 2003, 1:19 AM
Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha!!!!???!?!??!?

You are the biggest dunce in the whole world!!?!??!!!
replying on Belgium and rose tears by SupremeDreamer 30 Oct 2003, 1:18 AM
Incidentally, I was there last week, eating fifteen sausages, twelve eggs, one hundred thousand chips, a million baked beans, and one very small piece of toast. And I saw you! Fellating the greasy Italian man behind the counter! OMG LOL ASL!?!??!?!!?
replying on Belgium and rose tears by SupremeDreamer 30 Oct 2003, 1:17 AM
Ah yes! That famous monument to "St. Gile". You nonce.

replying on EarthWaterAir - Hey! Look! IM MR FIRE! by Y2kSlamPoet 28 Oct 2003, 5:37 AM
I reiterate my five crucial points.

1. SupremeDreamer is a tremendous dunce.
2. His assessment of his own importance is hopelessly inaccurate.
3. His assessment of his own ability is hopelessly inaccurate.
4. The thoughts produced by his brain are not worthy of serious consideration.
5. He is incapable of following the most basic rules of spelling and punctuation.