on Guess the place! by Patsy
15 Aug 2004, 1:14 AM
*10* Take the time to spell check.
on Secret Love by ForgottenSoul17
15 Aug 2004, 1:07 AM
Scratch the last line and it is quite decent. *7*
on Peppermint by fevriere
15 Aug 2004, 1:17 AM
Fantabulactifying! I think. *10*
on Creator of Filth by hobojo
15 Aug 2004, 1:06 AM
What is this about? Your sister's period? Whatever. *6*
on Fugitively Speaking by Dovina
15 Aug 2004, 1:18 AM
Like it a lot and that is that *9*
on Hope in a Bottle by timtonio
15 Aug 2004, 1:10 AM
Good, except for the part about a lazy eye. *9*
P.S. Everything owned can be redeemed at you local Wal-mart for an item of equal or lesser value.
P.S. Everything owned can be redeemed at you local Wal-mart for an item of equal or lesser value.
on 30,000 and falling by That One
15 Aug 2004, 1:12 AM
Ah, remember those wacky days, when everthing went wrong? Yeah, good times. *9.83333333333*
on Broken for Completion by Chasz Misleading
15 Aug 2004, 1:19 AM
not too shabby, ok...maybe a bit shabby...but that's good. *8.5*
on some deleted poem
15 Aug 2004, 1:21 AM
Very, very well done. I'd applaud but..you know.
Take my word for it. *10*
Take my word for it. *10*
on some deleted poem
15 Aug 2004, 1:23 AM
My range of emotion
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on some deleted poem
15 Aug 2004, 1:25 AM
Absolutely wonderful put-you-in-your-place piece *9*
on some deleted poem
15 Aug 2004, 1:28 AM
Cigarettes kill, but those annoying bastards who go around telling people not to kill themselves is worse. If you feel like smoking your blackened lungs out, be my guest. Oh, *8*
on As I wait to shoot a mallard, I consider life by somemorepoetry
15 Aug 2004, 1:33 AM
The Associated Press has declared this one of the best pieces that MacFrantic has ever read. Of course you suckered me in with the ellipsis... *10* Great title!
on As I wait to shoot a mallard, I consider life by somemorepoetry
15 Aug 2004, 1:33 AM
The Associated Press has declared this one of the best pieces that MacFrantic has ever read. Of course you suckered me in with the ellipsis... *10* Great title!
on some deleted poem
15 Aug 2004, 1:31 AM
If you are being stabbed while this is being written, then I vote it as the greatest poem submitted to a peer-style internet poem voting community/chatroom ever! But since you probably aren't, (being stabbed that is) I shall remain disappointed. *7*
I'll be honest...I didn't read it *6*
Now I'll be dishonest...Keanu Reeves is a prolific pioneer of well acted films, and he should refrain from having his vocal cords and face burned/lacerated by chemicals, prefferably in pill form, blue or red. (I love irony)
Now I'll be dishonest...Keanu Reeves is a prolific pioneer of well acted films, and he should refrain from having his vocal cords and face burned/lacerated by chemicals, prefferably in pill form, blue or red. (I love irony)
on some deleted poem
15 Aug 2004, 1:00 AM
Not average... *5.1 or 4.9*
on Society by QuirkyWonder
15 Aug 2004, 1:02 AM
Due to the odd typos and the fact the I'm about to pass out. *7.5*
on Reality by Sirens_Voice
15 Aug 2004, 1:04 AM
Good idea... i myself like vagueness a lot. *8*