poemranker ::20 most recent comments by MacFrantic and replies

Comments byMacFrantic, the 20 most recent, including replies. Only comments on poems

replying on A Vernal Tale by MacFrantic 18 Nov 2007, 3:13 PM
Thanks, that was very helpful.
on from Me to you by Alex Green 1 Sep 2007, 5:47 PM
This is my favorite of your songs. Very good madam, very good.
on Stuck in Re-Verse by Alex Green 20 Aug 2007, 11:00 AM
If only these douchebags could hear you sing, Mel.
replying on On and On and On by MacFrantic 11 Jul 2007, 11:33 AM
Spot on Dovina, you've also aced the reason for the length, but I've never written an undiscplined rant in my life...most mistakes are deliberate and if it's annoying, I'm usually embellishing.
replying on Tirade of a Venetian Ghost by MacFrantic 22 Jun 2007, 11:56 PM
The title refers to Shakespeare as he wrote much about Venice.
replying on Time Imperfect by MacFrantic 7 Jun 2007, 12:27 AM
eloquently put.
on Drowning by wilco 1 Feb 2007, 8:00 PM
Hey! I have a poem with the same title. But this is totally different, and enjoyable. Well written, in fact. Loved "So I’ll just wrap myself in another cliché
of cheap bourbon and unlit cigarettes."

Also, S3's "your" should be "you're"
on Me by berdabear 1 Feb 2007, 7:56 PM
Wonderful confession from 7th grader to 7th grader. Bravo!
on i am probably on my 7th shot of vodka by tralala42001 1 Feb 2007, 7:55 PM
ugh...not your best. if you had read this, you probably would have made it more interesting in revision. if you did read it...why didn't you delete it?
on i don't recall the last 8 minutes by tralala42001 1 Feb 2007, 7:52 PM
the first two lines are kind of useless. However, it winds down well.
on Weep In Me by blueyes 1 Feb 2007, 7:51 PM
I like the last stanza, but isn't subtle enough.
on The Crossing by Hillarystep 1 Feb 2007, 7:49 PM
Apart from how showy and verbose this poem is, it is EXTREMELY well written and re-readable.
on Pre Dance Jitters by Butterflywriter 1 Feb 2007, 7:47 PM
Could be better. I'm really not a fan of this simplistic image structure that takes so many lines to say very little.
on He doesn't love me by tuthaliash 1 Feb 2007, 7:44 PM
This is perfectly concise. Good suicide note.
on Coming Back by x311 1 Feb 2007, 7:40 PM
This poem seems to echo delusion throughout. I hope that was your intent, if not...this isn't very good.
on Tunnel Vision by x311 1 Feb 2007, 7:39 PM
the lack of definition is a little irksome, but aside from that, the tone is clear. I liked it.
replying on Stream of Consciousness (#2) by MacFrantic 31 Jan 2007, 10:10 AM
nay, I type slow
replying on Darkroom Dancer by MacFrantic 31 Jan 2007, 10:07 AM
yep
replying on Darkroom Dancer by MacFrantic 31 Jan 2007, 10:07 AM
yep
replying on New Year by wilco 13 Jan 2007, 11:27 AM
oh, and patty could use about 5 minutes to stop taking everything so seriously.