replying on New Year by wilco
13 Jan 2007, 11:24 AM
not on you as MUCH as them, but I'm just as bad, don't worry. We wouldn't write poetry if we didn't think ours was divine.
I love that people are taking themselves so seriously. I haven't been commenting at all because I've just been using this site as an archive, but damn! Is there something going around running up peoples' asses or what? I absolutely love the sarcasm and the synthetic wit. I flaunt my vocabulary as much as the next person, but hey! Nobody talks like this. Good luck on all future ventures you guys, and I hope you'll find someone to give you that hug you so desperately need.
P.S. Best poem I've ever read. *5*
P.S. Best poem I've ever read. *5*
on soft candy by skaskowski
25 Dec 2006, 10:49 AM
I loved this before and it's still good revised.
replying on untitled by MacFrantic
10 Dec 2006, 11:30 PM
So...318
replying on untitled by MacFrantic
10 Dec 2006, 11:30 PM
Enkidu (65)
D. $ Fontera (63)
Deimos (2)
D. $ Fontera (63)
Deimos (2)
replying on untitled by MacFrantic
10 Dec 2006, 6:21 PM
By the way, I have 316 poems on this site...and counting.
replying on untitled by MacFrantic
10 Dec 2006, 6:19 PM
I'm really just using this site to archive. I read many of the poems, but I don't comment much any more, and I don't care too much if people comment on mine. I'm becoming a better poet through experiencing life, rather than spending all my time on the computer. Be well, and I thank you for the comment.
replying on The Red Chain by MacFrantic
18 Sep 2006, 10:39 AM
I always sacrifice sense, and I never take mistakes out. Thanks.
replying on Deliberate Exclusion by MacFrantic
5 Sep 2006, 12:39 PM
Actually, I am indicating that the love is gone. The kiss is one-sided, and she just goes along with it, hence "illusions." I can see that the spark is gone, but she won't admit it. She still speaks lovingly, a lie. She is no longer a lover, but a friend.
The deliberate exclusion would be Love, but I won't try to change her.
The deliberate exclusion would be Love, but I won't try to change her.
replying on Pane Glass Lake by MacFrantic
29 Aug 2006, 2:41 PM
You are correct. Thank you.
on A Tragic Love Tryst In The Park Near The Sewage Works by Edna Sweetlove
19 Aug 2006, 10:47 AM
This is one of the funniest things i have ever read, and that a fantastic accomplishment. i can only give you a ten, but i wish i could give you more, if you know what i mean...
on Memories Of Home by Edna Sweetlove
14 Aug 2006, 12:21 AM
HA, sweet drivel
on Fragrant Love by Engelbert Humpalot
14 Aug 2006, 12:20 AM
Not one for actual storylines, but this was more than adequate...good one.
on Something More by drnick
14 Aug 2006, 12:17 AM
An inordinate amount of people spell lose loose and i don't know why...however, not bad.
on Sarah Hine's Cries by rahson_s
14 Aug 2006, 12:16 AM
Perfectly reasonable.
on I Got the Romanian Flea-Bitten Blues by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
14 Aug 2006, 12:14 AM
Wow, this is gorgeous, especially the 2nd half. Noice.
on The Consultation by Edna Sweetlove
14 Aug 2006, 12:13 AM
Poetically, outstanding. Morally, disturbing. 11
on flow-charts by FreeFormFixation
12 Aug 2006, 1:00 AM
Ha! "Flows" perfectly. A wonderful statement. Especially liked the last three lines. Kudos.