on My Swarthy Bane by MacFrantic
15 Aug 2004, 8:12 PM
thanks, this much I-------------------------------I
on Bad-Ass Mudder-Fugger by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w
17 Jan 2005, 11:09 AM
put it under concrete and you've got a *9*
on some deleted poem
10 Sep 2004, 6:02 AM
Ha!
on The Shocker (or "Where to put your fingers") by Tits
27 Sep 2004, 8:50 PM
Two in the shooter
One in the pooter
Two in the fruity
One in the booty
Two in the snatch
One in the hatch
Two in the thrill
One in the grill
Two in the parter
One in the farter
Two in the tunnel
One in the chunnel
Two in the sponge
One in the grunge
Two in the fish
One in the dish
Two in the naughty
One in the potty
Two if she swallows
One if she don't
Two in the bush
One in the tush
Two and a tongue
One just for fun
Two in the lap
One in the trap
One in the pooter
Two in the fruity
One in the booty
Two in the snatch
One in the hatch
Two in the thrill
One in the grill
Two in the parter
One in the farter
Two in the tunnel
One in the chunnel
Two in the sponge
One in the grunge
Two in the fish
One in the dish
Two in the naughty
One in the potty
Two if she swallows
One if she don't
Two in the bush
One in the tush
Two and a tongue
One just for fun
Two in the lap
One in the trap
on On the Discovery of Bacchus and Lovely Clothespins by MacFrantic
7 Oct 2004, 1:26 PM
This is my one hundreth poem on the site! Under three pseudonyms of course! Keep on keepin' on.
on A Better God by Dovina
21 Oct 2004, 10:00 PM
A very satisfying plan, if only it could be... *sigh* What the hell! I'm an atheist! *8*
on Cold Indifference by cuddlytiger17
21 Oct 2004, 10:02 PM
Quite "...", yes, quite. *9*
on You Were a Jerk to me in my Dream Last Night by T. Jonathron Remp
17 Nov 2004, 6:28 PM
senseless and wonderful *7*
on some deleted poem
5 Jan 2005, 10:01 PM
Very good weaved couplets. This type of poem is not exactly my cup of tea, but you pay attention to construction, which is always worthwile. *7*
on Cigarettes and Masturbation by Lifeboatman
5 Jan 2005, 10:10 PM
Apathy:
Lack of interest or concern, especially regarding matters of general importance or appeal; indifference.
Still a good poem, regardless. I still can't believe I took time to inspect your faulty contradiction by way of thesaurus. *8*
P.S.
Indifference:
apathy demonstrated by an absence of emotional reactions
P.P.S. I am a f**king loser.
Lack of interest or concern, especially regarding matters of general importance or appeal; indifference.
Still a good poem, regardless. I still can't believe I took time to inspect your faulty contradiction by way of thesaurus. *8*
P.S.
Indifference:
apathy demonstrated by an absence of emotional reactions
P.P.S. I am a f**king loser.
on Revaluations by Beyond_Dreams
17 Jan 2005, 11:21 AM
Okay, I respect the subtle anger at humanity poem, but it seems that this one is missing a good point *6*.
on some deleted poem
19 Jan 2005, 9:02 PM
you know...you know... *9*
on some deleted poem
25 Jan 2005, 9:24 PM
very good. *9*
Not in a very "descriptive review" sort of mood.
Sorrrrrrrrry. Jerks!
Not in a very "descriptive review" sort of mood.
Sorrrrrrrrry. Jerks!
on Paris 1941-63 by Mister Cakes
7 Feb 2005, 7:29 PM
it seems that you put about 2 seconds of thought into your poems. And that is not a compliment. *6*
on some deleted poem
12 Feb 2005, 7:25 PM
hardly concrete, but I do enjoy the first stanza. *7*
on Dreamtigers (Borges) by Sasha
12 Feb 2005, 7:29 PM
Only major problem- other than the whole "prose" thing-is the large space near the end. Find some way to fix it. *7* (I automatically deduct 1 point for prose, sorry)
on Blood and roses. by backstreetdreamer
12 Feb 2005, 7:34 PM
I can't believe I'm saying this, but if this had actually been a prose poem, I might have given it a higher score. And don't use "evermore" ever or more.
*8*
*8*