on The Critical and His Horse by MacFrantic
19 Feb 2005, 12:31 AM
I thank you to no limit.
on Plastic Explosive Iraqi-Man by Enkidu
13 Feb 2005, 9:52 AM
Ah, middle-eastern inspiration. I can't believe people failed to get this.
-Enkidu
-D. $ Fontera
-Enkidu
-D. $ Fontera
on Kiss of a rose by backstreetdreamer
12 Feb 2005, 7:35 PM
Why not just call it "The Name of the Rose" *5*
on Orion takes aim by oneglove
12 Feb 2005, 7:39 PM
Oh, please get rid of L4. *7*
on CUPID by al-naafiysh
12 Feb 2005, 7:42 PM
Man, that was such an entertaining poem! Little changes here and there-I won't be specific- and it's perfect! *10*
Can you put a single stanza in your "favorites" section?
Can you put a single stanza in your "favorites" section?
on Prayer of Forgiveness by Dovina
12 Feb 2005, 7:45 PM
definitely needs a line that stands out. *7*
on some deleted poem
12 Feb 2005, 7:46 PM
good ending. *8*
on Bridesmaids in the Rain by wilco
12 Feb 2005, 8:25 PM
so good, very nice picture. *9*
on Starless by MacFrantic
13 Feb 2005, 9:45 AM
There really should be more werewolf poems.
on broken pieces of a candy heart by brazen
13 Feb 2005, 9:47 AM
Wow, single stanzas are ruling write now. In this, it happens to be the last. *7*
on Insanity by Lifeboatman
13 Feb 2005, 9:48 AM
Vinsanity! *5*
on The Man I Love by Dovina
13 Feb 2005, 9:01 PM
if you say so. *6*
on Dustin(Incomplete) by thepinkbunnyofdoom
19 Feb 2005, 9:41 AM
Hey! That name is my own, without the whole (incomplete) deal.
on ...on the Benefits of Being Ugly by Goad
5 Mar 2005, 8:59 PM
Good
on Fat girls Who Wear Short Skirts During Winter Quarter by DurtKL
8 Mar 2005, 9:20 PM
RION12
Q.If these "bitches" don't know anything about you,
nor do you care about them, nor do they have the
irrelevant ability to do things that you can do,
nor can they say shit to you, and you care more
about their ability to perform oral sex on a man
than the poem itself, then why comment?
A. you're a douchebag, and this poem is very
original and very good.
*10*
Q.If these "bitches" don't know anything about you,
nor do you care about them, nor do they have the
irrelevant ability to do things that you can do,
nor can they say shit to you, and you care more
about their ability to perform oral sex on a man
than the poem itself, then why comment?
A. you're a douchebag, and this poem is very
original and very good.
*10*
on Lesson in Wickedness by eyrbare
8 Mar 2005, 9:53 PM
good. *9*
on After He Left by Dovina
2 Aug 2005, 10:44 AM
One of the best ending stanzas I have ever read, but the first one could use a bit of work. It makes sense, but the change in tenses and the last line-in the first stanza-is a bit grey. *9*
on Interstellar Planetary Escape Plan by drnick
2 Aug 2005, 10:47 AM
It would be more intriguing if it wasn't written like it just came out of "Where the Sidewalk Ends". *7*