on SO LONG MY BELOVED by prettyktm
2 Aug 2005, 10:54 AM
Not too many soldiers pussy out like this, and please don't just repeat in the last stanza what you said in the first stanza. I know it's free verse, but the structuring is pitiful. *4*
How old are you? Are you expecting positive feedback with this load? Just use the word "fuck", nobody holds it against you. What we do hold against you is your poor spelling, rudimentary grammar, and total lack of poetic understanding. "Tragedic"? COME ON! *2*
on Wars Between Held Breath's by thepinkbunnyofdoom
2 Aug 2005, 10:59 AM
Better englsih translation and you've got a solid bedtime story here. *7*
on Wars Between Held Breath's by thepinkbunnyofdoom
2 Aug 2005, 11:00 AM
englsih? that's ironic.
on HOW IT USUALLY ENDS! by pennymarie
2 Aug 2005, 11:01 AM
The first stanza ruined it for me, sorry. *6*
on writers block by Jesus' Pedometer
2 Aug 2005, 11:03 AM
Ha! Always an uphill...what's the word? Darn it! *9*
on Life is not serious by daggatolar
2 Aug 2005, 11:07 AM
A bit jumbled. *7*
on untitled by AaronJKeating
2 Aug 2005, 11:08 AM
Glorious imagery. Just great. Loved it all the way. *10*
on Potato hail by T. Jonathron Remp
2 Aug 2005, 1:32 PM
Absurd! Wonderfully Potato! Superb poem without the potatoing as well! *10*
on Forgiveness by Niphredil
2 Aug 2005, 10:49 AM
Very good! I loved "before your blood congeals into hate". Could've done without the misplaced last line. *9*
on Pain, I Curse Thee by woodstock20000
17 Jan 2006, 10:49 PM
I don't know why, but I like this.P-e-rish *7*
on Spinning, reeling by ecargo
17 Jan 2006, 10:51 PM
Hah, this is pretty damn good, and I don't care at all about what you have to say. *9*
on some deleted poem
17 Jan 2006, 10:54 PM
Didn't like how it ended much, but great, nonetheless. *9*
on some deleted poem
17 Jan 2006, 10:56 PM
Oy! Not for me...*6*