on some deleted poem
29 Mar 2006, 10:54 AM
This is really good. I am astounded by the quality of your poetry. *9*
on some deleted poem
4 Apr 2006, 11:36 PM
Good, not great, but good. *7*
on Explorations Underground by ecargo
4 Apr 2006, 11:40 PM
I love the last line, money. *9*
on Malice In Wonderland (edited) by Caducus
28 Jan 2006, 2:07 AM
I enjoyed the idea *7*
on The Acorn Daisies by MacFrantic
10 Feb 2006, 3:47 PM
oops, *they're*, goddamn it
on The Peccadillary by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
18 Mar 2006, 12:12 AM
Sweet lord 'twas remarkable. I do hope you do more. Particularly funny: "To go on a bender with communion wine." and "To address a Knight of the Realm as a 'Mr'." *10*
on writer's block by Zoetrope
10 Feb 2006, 3:52 PM
Impressive, in a word. *10*
on Looking Back by x0lovelylarnx0
18 Mar 2006, 12:08 AM
Good "conversational" piece, but a bit lacking as a poem. Was "elementry" intentional? Please say it was. *6*
on Harp Song of the Prawne Men by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
26 Feb 2006, 11:16 AM
Magnifico! I love this. Ahaha. *sigh* *10*
on lost souls by aamir_trichy
21 Feb 2006, 6:30 AM
Ugh, this caves in fast. *4*
on Sunday i will dream again by Caducus
21 Feb 2006, 6:28 AM
This is very satisfying, but a few of the adj's seem forced. A I wish I could give you a 9.5, because with a couple tweaks this is an 11 for me. *9*
on An Interview With King David by amanda_dcosta
26 Feb 2006, 10:53 AM
This is okay, a bit roundabout, I liked the Love of God theme and the ending. Could've been better *7*
on some deleted poem
26 Feb 2006, 10:56 AM
The pace of this poem is superb, yet the syntax is strange. Very nice. *8*
on Into the Shadows I Crawl by Silverjackel
26 Feb 2006, 10:58 AM
Nothing particularly intriguing about this. Very mediocre. *6*
on My Shattered Love by Silverjackel
26 Feb 2006, 11:01 AM
I just don't know, this is better than your other post, but the adj's seem extremely forced and the scheme is too formulaic. It makes you isolate and search for rhyme. *6*
on Today's Spam by nentwined
26 Feb 2006, 11:03 AM
Not the best, but entertaining. *7*
on Moonlit Glare by Silverjackel
26 Feb 2006, 11:06 AM
Quaint and lovely. *8*
on Desperate Revival by Silverjackel
26 Feb 2006, 11:10 AM
This is really pretty ugly. You need to stop using a dictionary, and if you are not, learn to simplify your language and still convey the same message. You conflate garbage words like "mope" with a misplace "inaugurate". *5*